Date: August 21, 2008 07:56 pm Title: The Pencil Is Uncensored
That's so clever how you put the epilogue at the beginning! I love those time-warps.
10 [Report This]Date: May 20, 2008 04:58 pm Title: Feet Don't Fail Me Now
Awww.
So is this the end?
Because this is adorable.
Jim and Pam conversations are love.
Author's Response: The sequel is in the works right now, but there is a mini chapter to end this one. I havent finished editing that one yet. Stay tuned!
9 [Report This]Date: May 19, 2008 01:14 pm Title: Feet Don't Fail Me Now
Awesome!!! I loved this passage:
“Ryan told me you were looking for me.”
Jim looked at her with a surprised look. “So you and Ryan are in cahoots now?”
“I guess. Now that you’re leaving, I need…”
“I’m not going anywhere.” He interrupted.
So sweet!! Great ending, and i'm definitely looking forward to the sequel, you got me totally hooked!
Date: April 19, 2008 05:33 am Title: Pile of Faxes
This is great! I love this story. I'm already really looking forward to the sequel! Hope you'll update soon..
Date: April 18, 2008 09:17 am Title: Here's Your One Chance, Fancy
good...love it...love that it is a flashback...can't wait for more!!
8 [Report This]Date: April 18, 2008 08:29 am Title: Here's Your One Chance, Fancy
He would never believe that she simply loved him for him. Great line. Here's to the urge to write and write some more!
Date: April 17, 2008 09:18 pm Title: Here's Your One Chance, Fancy
update soon please!!
Date: April 16, 2008 04:38 am Title: Cold Embers
Awesome chapter! I really like where this is going and how you have Ryan being so nice! (: Please update soon; this is great!
8 [Report This]Date: April 15, 2008 07:00 am Title: Cold Embers
Now, that's an interesting conversation between her and Ryan. I'll be interested to see what comes of it! --Strider
Date: April 14, 2008 09:48 pm Title: Epilogue
I'm sorry I haven't said anything yet. I really like this one and am happy to know there will be more!!!
9 [Report This]Date: April 14, 2008 06:19 am Title: The Pencil Is Uncensored
I like the conversation between Pam and Ryan. I don't think anyone's done that before. Nice job!
8 [Report This]Date: April 12, 2008 08:06 am Title: Epilogue
Very intriguing. "...you've managed to kill me with your leaving, your coming back and with your girlfriend." Liked that line.
Date: April 12, 2008 07:46 am Title: Epilogue
This is great! Can't wait to read more!
Date: April 11, 2008 11:10 pm Title: Epilogue
Oh....hooked already! Hope you update fast!!