1 [Report This]Date: December 27, 2023 10:50 am Title: Chapter 1
A fantastic character study of Pam Beesly!
1 [Report This]Date: March 24, 2019 07:56 am Title: Chapter 1
I really liked this!
10 [Report This]Date: March 01, 2010 07:34 pm Title: Chapter 1
This was so, so sweet! The last sentence pretty much summed up everything I love about this story. It makes their love more real and honest.
Lovely, lovely story!
Date: April 10, 2009 06:34 am Title: Chapter 1
again, you have some beautiful imagery in here, the way you describe Pam is gorgeous, I love it!
Date: January 14, 2009 01:04 pm Title: Chapter 1
Very well written. Really emphasizes the all too forgotten truth that people don't have to be perfect to be perfect for each other.
Date: April 24, 2008 02:10 pm Title: Chapter 1
What? Jim and Pam aren't perfect? Darnit, there goes my whole belief system ;)!
"the soles of her feet were hard with calluses"
This makes me smile all sorts of ways, because my feet are like, god awful. Calluses, scars, just about as ugly as feet can be. But if Jim loves Pam's feet, there is hope for my feet yet!
And the fact that Pam played soccer? Seriously. Can I marry this story? I played soccer until I blew out my knee. And I have always wanted a soccer playing Pam.
I love the description of Pam. Because. Wow. It is perfect. Because it is. Pam is perfectly imperfect. She is human, but I love everything that she chooses to be as a human. Man, my girl crush is really shining through.
Date: April 14, 2008 09:27 pm Title: Chapter 1
That was sweet -- you should do a companion piece with Pam thinking about Jim's imperfections. =)
Author's Response: That's a really good idea - maybe I will! Thanks for the idea. Cred to you if it does happen. :)