Date: December 26, 2016 08:51 pm Title: Chapter 3
I wish I could describe this better but I am not a writer and have never had a way with words but I love the way you write. It's so true to character and very realistic to Jim and Pam. This isn't fairytaled up. They way you've written out his sexual history and his thoughts and feelings on the matters of women and sex is almost exactly my thoughts.
You are definitely one of my favorite authors.
Author's Response: Idajno80, thank you so much! So cool to get a review after all this time! I'm glad you enjoyed this story and that it spoke to you.
Just to do a little plug: My first novel will be published in 2017. It's a young adult novel called ZENN DIAGRAM (you can check it out on Amazon or Goodreads). It'll be available on 4/4/17. I hope you'll read it! It's not Jim and Pam, but if you like my writing, maybe you'll enjoy it!
10 [Report This]Date: October 11, 2008 07:27 am Title: Chapter 3
MORE :) We need more detailsssssssss. Maybe his first time with karen or katy... or just more JIM PAM SMUT!!!!!!!!!!!!
10 [Report This]Date: October 11, 2008 07:21 am Title: Chapter 2
Urm, DUH!!! Don't ask stupid questions, but also UPDATE MOREEEEEEE :)
10 [Report This]Date: October 11, 2008 07:14 am Title: Chapter 1
That was SO hot, and I loveeeeeeed how Pam was so keen to know how many women Jim had been with lol. I love how you bring the funny to your hot smut. MORE =)
Date: May 29, 2008 12:40 pm Title: Chapter 3
Hey, there, wendolf...what happened to this one? I do believe you owe us one more chapter...pretty please?
Author's Response: Ah, Nan . . . I was just thinking about this little "number" this morning. So glad there is someone else out there keeping tabs so I don't get lazy. I'll see what I can do for you, my friend. ;-)
Date: April 20, 2008 10:48 pm Title: Chapter 3
Mark, who had Stephanie now but had spent years on a quest for willing semen receptacles, often called Jim a chick.
best line ever. willing semen receptacles. also non-fic is for people with LIVES! pshaw!!
Author's Response: Glad you liked that one, TD! Thanks so much for your comments!
10 [Report This]Date: April 20, 2008 04:58 pm Title: Chapter 1
"So while Kim had felt like an exotic vacation where he was always a little out of place, Pam felt like coming home. And as everyone knew, Jim was no world traveler. He always preferred the comfort of home."
love. it. don't stop! (twss)
i found this story on a whim. and i loved it so much. damn. now it means i have to subscribe to see when you post new stories! who has the time?? if you find the time to write, then i will find the time to read :)
Author's Response: chelibelle -- so glad you found me! Don't have any new stories out, but feel free to go check out my "old" ones (I've only been writing fic for about two months . . . so there's not that many). Thanks so much for your review!
Date: April 20, 2008 03:43 pm Title: Chapter 3
I love Jim Halpert! He is such a perfect creature....lol
Author's Response: Ah, yes he is . . . funny how fictional characters can be that way, isn't it? Thanks so much for your review!
10 [Report This]Date: April 20, 2008 12:41 pm Title: Chapter 3
Gah...you capture these characters so well! Seriously. Great job, as per usual.
Author's Response: Thanks so much, honey. I appreciate your taking the time to review!
10 [Report This]Date: April 20, 2008 11:27 am Title: Chapter 3
Excellent chapter, wendolf. I love this: So while Kim had felt like an exotic vacation where he was always a little out of place, Pam felt like coming home. And as everyone knew, Jim was no world traveler. He always preferred the comfort of home.
Youre end notes make me sad. I hope you'll ieep writing for us!
Author's Response: Nan . . . don't get sad yet. Writing fic feels a little bit like chocolate to me -- easier to give up in theory than it is in reality. Thanks as always for reviewing!
Date: April 20, 2008 11:03 am Title: Chapter 3
Don't leave us!! I NEED you!! I can't bear to lose another favorite fic author to REAL writing! Pish posh...this is better.
...seriously, please???
Author's Response: As I told Nan ... I SAY I'm going to take a fic break . . . but it has become sort of addictive. We'll see if I can actually stay away for long. Thanks for reviewing -- so appreciated!
10 [Report This]Date: April 20, 2008 09:28 am Title: Chapter 3
"So while Kim had felt like an exotic vacation where he was always a little out of place, Pam felt like coming home. And as everyone knew, Jim was no world traveler. He always preferred the comfort of home."
this line is perfection. i really liked this whole chapter but this line especially is brilliant.
Author's Response: That seems to be a popular line ;-) I'm a homebody myself, so I like the idea of Jim finding that feeling of home in pam. Thanks so much for your review!
Date: April 20, 2008 08:53 am Title: Chapter 3
Well, dude-slut is one I've never heard before, and will certainly start using on certain friends of mine... ;) I really liked this chapter - it was really interesting, and funny, and a lovely exploration of how Jim really feels about Pam. Great job!
Author's Response: Thanks Ruby! Yeah, dude slut is just something random that popped into my head. They exist, right? Thanks as always for your review!
8 [Report This]Date: April 19, 2008 10:45 pm Title: Chapter 1
Great combination of serious talks, hot sex and funny puns. Did I mention the hot sex?
Author's Response: Hmm. You doesn't like hot sex and funny puns? ;-) Or funny sex and hot puns? Okay . . .maybe not. Thanks so much for your review, as always! Truly appreciated.
Date: April 19, 2008 03:46 pm Title: Chapter 2
Definitely continue! I'd like to hear all about Jim's conquests as well as give him a chance to question her a bit too :o)
Author's Response: Thanks for the encouragement JRAddict! Hopefully I'll have more of this one...
Date: April 16, 2008 08:53 am Title: Chapter 2
so of course that is a ridiculous question! we wanna hear all about Jim having sex :) hehe
but i have to say, if this is putting a hold on June 10th, I don't care if you never finish this. :)
Author's Response: Okay, June 10th is done, so we can carry on with Jim's sex life ;-) Thanks for your input!
Date: April 16, 2008 07:05 am Title: Chapter 2
*sign* I just read this wonderful chapter. I really liked the first part where all these thoughts are exploding in Pam's head. That happens to me!! I usually talk like that too-rapid fire,automatic machine gun fast. so i could totally relate to that.
Author's Response: Yeah, who doesn't have that? I know I do... Thanks for reviewing, JamFan!
Date: April 16, 2008 06:50 am Title: Chapter 2
Just saw this new chapter and i am SO excited!! DON'T EVEN THINK about not writing about Jimcapades. You know we know that you know what we want...Give it to us! we are not worthy! *arms oustretched, bowing down to you* Seriously,You are a Major talent. I love your stories and so do everyone else.
Author's Response: JamFan, you are too kind. I'm glad you're enjoying this ;-) I mean, who wouldn't enjoy a little Jimcapades, right? Thanks for reviewing!
Date: April 16, 2008 02:01 am Title: Chapter 2
I'm loving this story - LOL for the lead pipe... It's very sweet and fun (and hot) and you should definitely continue!
Author's Response: Glad you liked the lead pipe bit. I chuckled when I wrote it. Thanks for the review, Ruby!
Date: April 15, 2008 11:37 pm Title: Chapter 2
totally want more:)
Author's Response: I'll do my best. Thanks ninrutgib! (what does that stand for, anyway?)
Date: April 15, 2008 10:59 pm Title: Chapter 2
Please please please more!! This is really interesting, and sweet and sexy at the same time.
MORE!!!!!
Author's Response: I'll do my best. Thanks PamPong!
10 [Report This]Date: April 15, 2008 09:58 pm Title: Chapter 2
I love how believable this story is, and that Maytag line was so incredibly Jim. As for whether or not you should continue? As long as you're willing to write, we'll be willing to read (I think that's pretty unanimous)! I really like your insight to Pam in this story, too. She's kinda confident, in true FNB style, but at the same time there's a simplicity to her that you've captured really well. And Jim's lines are really in character too. Just a great job all around :)
Author's Response: Thanks, honey! I love that Maytag line, if I do say so myself. Can totally see Jim saying the "unbelievable" in that voice of his. Thanks so much as always for your reviews!
Date: April 15, 2008 09:37 pm Title: Chapter 1
Yes, keep going! The first chapter was hot! and the tone was lovely. I would love to read more.
Author's Response: Thanks, my friend "Kate!"
Date: April 15, 2008 09:14 pm Title: Chapter 2
Not sure if I'll do more on this story or not . . . thoughts? Do we want to hear more about Jim's sexcapades in college?
If you're writing it, then yes please.
Hmmm. Maybe a ridiculous question considering I know who my audience is ;-)
Aw you know us so well :) Also great stuff again, I wish I had something constructive to say but it's the end of the semester and my writing classes have me workshopped-out.
Author's Response: Ah, writing workshops . . . say no more. Thanks for taking the time to review!
8 [Report This]Date: April 15, 2008 08:19 pm Title: Chapter 2
Yes, more-- this is fascinating Jim insight I want to know about the other 4 and more fluffy/smut with Pam... Please??
Author's Response: Who doesn't like fluffy Jim/Pam smut? Hopefully I'll be able to get you some more soon... Thanks for reviewing!