Date: April 22, 2008 08:12 pm Title: Quiet
Just lovely. My favorite part? Pam blurting out that she knew Jim's number in Stamford. A perfect post-Chair Model story. Thanks!
Author's Response: Thank you so much. That part about the Stamford number has actually been floating around my head for a while, just waiting for a story to settle in.rnThanks for reading :)
10 [Report This]Date: April 22, 2008 08:11 pm Title: Quiet
Wow, that was just perfect, the voices, the tone, everything. I think this is the backstory BJ Novak had in mind when he wrote Jim' talking head about buying the ring. Really wonderfully done, a joy to read. Thank you for this.
Date: April 22, 2008 07:45 pm Title: Quiet
This is just beautiful. Exactly how I imagine it was for them, with the gradual blurting out of secrets and the easy forgiveness. And the last few paragraphs are so well-written, they almost sing. I love that Jim was thinking he was right to wait for this - I imagine that's pretty much what he's thinking. Great job!
Date: April 22, 2008 07:35 pm Title: Quiet
Simply beautiful. Such gorgeous imagery and language. The whole thing was fantastic, but the last paragraph just killed me. You get them--and that paragraph, the simple light you paint their relationship in, as everything, proves that. Awesome!
Date: April 22, 2008 07:21 pm Title: Quiet
This is so beautiful and calm. I love imagining Jim/Pam the way you've written them here.
10 [Report This]Date: April 22, 2008 07:15 pm Title: Quiet
This is so sweet. I really liked the imagery and in-depth look at their relationship.