10 [Report This]Date: May 07, 2008 07:05 pm Title: Chapter 1
I loved this! I love Pam laughing about the whole situation, because I can see her being the kind of person who would find humor in most things.
Great job!
Date: May 06, 2008 05:59 pm Title: Chapter 1
That's nice, sillyrabbit! I especially like Jim's thoughts on Ryan and Toby.
Date: May 06, 2008 03:49 am Title: Chapter 1
That's really sweet. Very close to how I imagined/hoped their ride home went =)
I sure hope that Toby and Ryan get what's coming to them.
Date: May 05, 2008 07:30 pm Title: Chapter 1
Awe! absolutley too cute! This helped after last thursday! Stupid Toby! Pompass Ryan! I think you portrayed Jim very true to his character. He's not a complainer, especially now that he's with Pam, even with Toby and Ryan this was great! Well done!
Date: May 05, 2008 06:50 pm Title: Chapter 1
Ok, it's official. Blind Pam is just about the cutest thing ever. The characterization of the two of them was so spot on! I could fully picture Pam's spontaneous laughing fits as if they were a scene from the show.
My favorite line was definitely:
"We should quit before they take away what's left of our sanity,"
It made me chuckle. It was all very enjoyable, I'm off now to go read some of your other works.