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Reviewer: beanchimjin Signed [Report This]
Date: January 23, 2025 12:10 am Title: Chapter 10

Yes im rereading and i just noticed the first paragraph being a direct parallel to the paragraph in chapter 1 :((( god i love this story

Reviewer: beanchimjin Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: January 19, 2025 01:25 am Title: Chapter 11

The circular nature of the story just makes it so so much better UGH this one is gonna stay with me forever i wish i could erase my memory to relive this fic all over again.

Reviewer: beanchimjin Signed [Report This]
Date: January 18, 2025 11:04 pm Title: Chapter 6

I love the circular nature of how you write these chapters. Ending it with the same musings as before. But oh god Jim ..hopefully things will look up soon. I also want to meet this Pam

Reviewer: beanchimjin Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: January 18, 2025 10:41 pm Title: Chapter 5

Im actually kinda glad she left. He couldn't seriously had expected her to stay put? But im hopeful especially since you said so. This is really great. Ive read a lot of what if fics where Jim had gotten the corporate job and i think this is my absolute favorite iteration yet.

Reviewer: beanchimjin Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: January 18, 2025 10:10 pm Title: Chapter 4

That was AMAZINGFJISGSJSJA im literally CRYING OH MY GOD i was HOPING something just happened to the note oh god THIS WAS PERFECT

Reviewer: beanchimjin Signed [Report This]
Date: January 18, 2025 09:12 pm Title: Chapter 3

I like Matt, we need more Matt AHAHAHAH sigh oh Jim. "Beach Day wasnt enough" my heart aches. Im dying to know if Pam's note made it in his expense report at all or what

Reviewer: beanchimjin Signed [Report This]
Date: January 18, 2025 08:57 pm Title: Chapter 2

one more thing: his stasis here is eerily similar to that of Pam and Roys. I know it's not exactly the same but this push and pull and the staying out of obligation but not love it's just very interesting parallel

Reviewer: beanchimjin Signed [Report This]
Date: January 18, 2025 08:53 pm Title: Chapter 2

Cant help but feel like he isn't exactly being fair of wanting Pam to beg him to stay because...how would she even? Especially after the coal walk and then him being in a relationship.:(( he's right about one thing: he has to live with his decisions and they e hurt each other too much.

Reviewer: beanchimjin Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: January 18, 2025 08:12 pm Title: Chapter 1

Im DYING DOES THIS MEAN SHE NEVER SLIPPED THAT NOTE IN MY HEART IS BREAKING

Reviewer: darjeelingandcoke Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: September 13, 2021 01:16 pm Title: Chapter 11

This is an absolutely brutal story, and I'm so glad you gave Jim and Pam a happy ending after everything they went through.

Reviewer: happy bunny Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: April 25, 2019 06:07 am Title: Chapter 11

Loved this story. Liked the detailed descriptions of Jim’s emotional journey.

Reviewer: Hannah_Halpert Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: June 12, 2009 06:23 pm Title: Chapter 9

wowness x 10282

Reviewer: Hannah_Halpert Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: June 12, 2009 05:57 pm Title: Chapter 8

I'm so proud of Pam for moving to CA but also Jim, going out to CA to see her and fight for her... aw so brave :)

Reviewer: Hannah_Halpert Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: June 12, 2009 05:37 pm Title: Chapter 7

Freaking hell, Matt is awesome, Jim crying killed me. I love this.

Reviewer: Hannah_Halpert Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: June 12, 2009 05:08 pm Title: Chapter 6

Pam's gone, Jim is :( nooo!!! Loving where you are taking this.

Reviewer: Hannah_Halpert Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: June 12, 2009 04:53 pm Title: Chapter 5

Guh, okay I am so speechless at your awesomeness. I hate Karen, I can't believe Pam's gone, I love Matt and Mark and omg, poor Jim :(

Reviewer: Hannah_Halpert Signed [Report This]
Date: June 12, 2009 04:26 pm Title: Chapter 4

Jesus each chapter getsb etter and better!

Reviewer: Hannah_Halpert Signed [Report This]
Date: June 12, 2009 03:52 pm Title: Chapter 3

How have I missed this story! Amazing

Reviewer: Hannah_Halpert Signed [Report This]
Date: June 12, 2009 02:18 pm Title: Chapter 2

Okay was SO not expecting that lol. Jim, STOP IT!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: Hannah_Halpert Signed [Report This]
Date: June 12, 2009 01:59 pm Title: Chapter 1

Wow this is fantastic. Some good quality angst, so glad I was recommended this =)

Reviewer: Bayjb Signed [Report This]
Date: July 28, 2008 07:13 pm Title: Chapter 11

This was really great. I'm glad that they were able to have a family and get over the bumps they ran into. I'm super super sad this is ending but will definitely look for your next fic. Gosh I loved this one.

Reviewer: JennInTheCity Signed [Report This]
Date: July 28, 2008 06:53 pm Title: Chapter 11

I had trouble with parts of this story, but I'm glad I hung on till the end. I love future you gave them and you had such great imagery throughout. I really liked that you gave them some fertility trouble. It kept them very real and I really liked the conversation they had on Christmas about wanting children. Just excellent.

I can't wait to see what you are cooking up next!

Reviewer: LuxTenebrae Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: July 28, 2008 01:38 pm Title: Chapter 1

I am in love with how this story ended. I love your style of writing! Keep up the great work!

Reviewer: NanReg Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: July 28, 2008 07:27 am Title: Chapter 11

Bravo, Strawberry Fields!  Absolutely beautiful ending to a fantastic story.  So happy that they were able to save each other.

Reviewer: elly Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: July 28, 2008 06:22 am Title: Chapter 1

I feel this is what would've happened had Jim got the job in NY and moved there with the pantsuit queen. It's so refreshing to see good, quality fic on here again! Please tell me you're working on something else! ;)

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