7 [Report This]Date: May 06, 2008 03:34 pm Title: Chapter 1
That text message thing always bugged me. What did she text him? Why didn't he ever text back? Nice little piece of writing. :)
P.S., I love Author Responses as much as you love reviews! ;)
Author's Response: Yea, I've always wondered what she said. Thanks so much for the review!
5 [Report This]Date: May 06, 2008 12:35 pm Title: Chapter 1
Very cute! One typo I saw: It says "Indiana festival of lights" instead of "Indian". Other than that, very cute story.
Author's Response: Thanks so much for pointing that out! I fixed it. Thanks so much for the review!
Date: May 06, 2008 08:41 am Title: Chapter 1
Season 3 would have been so much better if something like that had happened.
Author's Response: Yea, I agree. Thanks for the review.
9 [Report This]Date: May 06, 2008 08:23 am Title: Chapter 1
I like it a lot! Short and sweet. Nice ending -- you can see the affection but also the pain between Pam and Jim at that moment.
Author's Response: Yea, so much pain. It BETTER lead to so much HAPPINESS before the end of the season if you know what I mean!