1 [Report This]Date: December 19, 2020 02:32 pm Title: Chapter 1
These are lovely little vignettes.
10 [Report This]Date: September 16, 2006 02:19 pm Title: Chapter 1
very good!! loved it!! these all seem like pretty reasonable/probable ways Pam would leave. great job! =)
10 [Report This]Date: September 15, 2006 03:05 pm Title: Chapter 1
Great vignettes. All plausible. And 'There's her answer'? It really is that simple...and that complicated.
Author's Response:
It really is that simple...and that complicated.
*sigh* I know, it is. Thanks for reading!
9 [Report This]Date: September 15, 2006 02:18 pm Title: Chapter 1
I really enjoyed those vignettes. Hee, Pam the runaway bride! That last one was just so sweet.
Author's Response: I like Pam the runaway bride too. I don't think we'll get to see that on the show though, sadly. (Although I don't think she will end up marrying Roy.) Thanks for reading!
10 [Report This]Date: September 15, 2006 02:16 pm Title: Chapter 1
I loved them all but #5 was my favorite.
10 [Report This]Date: September 15, 2006 06:38 am Title: Chapter 1
Loved the all but especially number 5
9 [Report This]Date: September 15, 2006 05:25 am Title: Chapter 1
Jim is her answer, isn't he? All of these are really nice- each of them is a logical, plausible way for Pam to move on with Jim. I'm holding on to hope for a "number 4" scenario, myself.
Author's Response: Well I don't think Pam will marry Roy, but I'm not really sure how all the logistics will work out. I'm actually really excited about the season coming back so we can see what great details they come up with. And thanks so much for the review!
10 [Report This]Date: September 14, 2006 10:17 pm Title: Chapter 1
One was great. Two had me cheering out loud. Three made me actually kind of sad. (The thought of Roy leaving Pam only sounds good for the reason that they would no longer be together, but I feel myself hating her for getting the easy way out, for being a coward right to the very end. And I feel like Jim shouldn't be a consolation prize, even though she would be happier with him.) Four is such a great portrait of a subtle yet jarring realization, almost too casual for something so big, but how things usually happen. Five is my absolute favorite. Because of the kissing, and the bravery, and the love in every line of dialogue. But especially because Pam isn't only taking one chance, but two, with her career. Perfect.
I loved that you went at this possibility from every angle, even the on that isn't so happy-making. Amazing job.
Author's Response: I really liked writing five--I think it was my favorite--so I'm glad you loved it too. But thanks so much for your comments on all of them!
10 [Report This]Date: September 14, 2006 09:54 pm Title: Chapter 1
The first one is what totally should have happened on the show--hello, Pam, drunken proposal does not equal romance.
The second was cute and fun and crazy enough to actually happen (if Jim wasn't in Australia).
Although Roy leaving her would be less satisfying for Jim, I'm actually shocked that he's so oblivious to not have done so already.
The fourth one was written beautifully, especially this part: Her life had been on this nice, simple, straight path until Jim came along. And now she was beginning to realize she didn't want that path, but there were no forks in the road, no way to get across to another path, another choice. Now Jim was practically offering her a ride to get somewhere new.
The last one was sweet and sexy.
Loved them all!
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you liked them all so much!