9 [Report This]Date: August 30, 2008 01:42 pm Title: Chapter 1
love it!!!
it was perfect and completely in-character!
amazing work!
10 [Report This]Date: July 06, 2008 03:57 pm Title: Chapter 1
What a great, groovy story. Very well-written and believable. High five.
10 [Report This]Date: June 09, 2008 12:37 pm Title: Chapter 1
I really did like it. I loved the way you described their physical proximity to one another. And the "I'm going to ask..." repeated was definately a nice touch. I hope you will continue this story. I'd love to read more.
Date: June 05, 2008 12:00 pm Title: Chapter 1
That was fantastic! I really enjoy your writing style. I'm not sure what it is, but there's just something different about it and it's really great. I liked this fic a lot. You did a great job at showing what you thought happened after the finale. I think this was more realistic than the other post-finale stories out there. Awesome job!
Date: June 04, 2008 10:37 pm Title: Chapter 1
I like that he didn't propose in this story because it would not have been the right time. But he was able to tell Pam that he was going to and that he was disappointed too. I think that is what she would need to know. He can't make it that special night, but he can make it special and now she knows for sure that is where he is going.
Date: May 28, 2008 10:26 pm Title: Chapter 1
Great job! This was really angsty and sweet all at the same time. I like how you put in the bit about the parking lot; it's a good thing for them to reflect on because of how deep a meaning it has. you really conveyed that well.
Date: May 17, 2008 07:32 am Title: Chapter 1
Lovely, lovely.
Date: May 16, 2008 09:26 pm Title: Chapter 1
I really enjoyed this...great job!
Date: May 16, 2008 09:06 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oh good, post-finale fanfic! I really liked it. I was kind of disappointed... ok very disappointed... when they didn't get engaged in the finale, but I choose to believe that he proposed later that night. Or the next day. Or... what happened in this here story. :)
Author's Response: Thank you. I thought about him proposing in this but I personally don't feel like it would be right for him to still propose the same night as that massive disappointment. Too many mixed emotions. I'm gald you liked it.
Date: May 16, 2008 08:50 pm Title: Chapter 1
Ahhhhh. You know, a good night's sleep did wonders for my take on the finale. And this right here? Has helped it ten times over again. I think my favorite part of it is that it isn't overly angsty from Pam's pov. (I got enough of that in my head from the Toby photo session.) It's just sweet and loving and comfy like I know the two of them to be.
Author's Response: I had a slightly more positive take on the finale than anyone else I've talked to. I think there was lots of development in their relationship even if it didn't instantly result in a proposal.rnThe fact that this helped at all....is wonderful. Thank you very much.