1 [Report This]Date: January 27, 2019 05:13 pm Title: Chapter 1
Aww this is so great!
I loved the rain proposal, but yours kinda makes me wish this has been how it went.
1 [Report This]Date: January 10, 2019 06:59 am Title: Chapter 1
I wish it had gone like this. Sure, what we got was sweet, but I like short, impulsive JAM.
10 [Report This]Date: February 21, 2010 08:28 pm Title: Chapter 1
O.h. m.y. g.o.d. That was just too perfect. You hear me? I loved that and it was just incredible. Great job, and just wow, again.
P.S. I don't mean to nag, but could you please reply this as I think for some reason the reply feature is broken for me or something - as I don't seem to be getting emails from MTT lately (like the confirmation letter when they post a fic or something). Thanks so much!
9 [Report This]Date: September 27, 2008 07:52 pm Title: Chapter 1
delicious!
i love kelly's character in this, too!
perfection, all at once!
10 [Report This]Date: September 27, 2008 07:48 pm Title: Chapter 1
“Be careful, okay?” He makes her promise. He’s been the model boyfriend, attentive and protective, taking her car to a garage to change the oil, and check the brakes. < very Jim, you wrote them perfectly!!!
8 [Report This]Date: August 25, 2008 09:13 pm Title: Chapter 1
"His rhythmic breathing has become the soundtrack to her nights, and without it, she’s not sure if she’ll be able to sleep."
What a beautiful line. This was a lovely story, so sweet and soo romantic. And I love this line: "He sends about a thousand text messages to Pam starting every one with “Dear wife,” and ending “your husband,” and counts the minutes until he can drive back up to New York again."
10 [Report This]Date: July 16, 2008 07:09 pm Title: Chapter 1
Wow, I don't know how I missed seeing this when it was first posted. Glad I decided to check out your other stories after I read your latest. Here's hoping Jim and Pam's first talking heads for season 5 is them telling us they did exactly this! I liked this, a lot.
Date: May 20, 2008 09:04 pm Title: Chapter 1
This was amazing! You've definitely captured Jim and Pam, so kudos to that. I think you should consider continuing, because it's that good.
Author's Response: Thanks!
Date: May 20, 2008 04:25 pm Title: Chapter 1
Umm, this may or may not have gotten me a little emotional. You are a phenomenal writer and I am so excited to have you a part of this fic community!
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad to be a part!
Date: May 20, 2008 07:29 am Title: Chapter 1
Okay, so I want this to happen. Like now. I love the idea of Jim rushing in the opposite direction from last year, but still trying to get to her. But this was my favorite line:
It’s almost as if she can feel them shift back to solid ground. They’re balanced again, the weight of the rings on their fingers equaling them out.
Awsome. Great job!
Author's Response: I want this to happen now too! Thanks! I'm glad you liked it!
Date: May 19, 2008 05:20 pm Title: Chapter 1
LOVED this. Especially these lines:
"It takes fifty seven minutes before he makes a decision.
He gets in his car on the fifty ninth minute."
Great.
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you liked it!
10 [Report This]Date: May 19, 2008 11:56 am Title: Chapter 1
I keep revising this, bashert, because it makes me so happy. I only wish there was more. Would you consider a new story picking up where you left off or slightly thereafter?
Author's Response: I'm really thinking about it, I think it would be fun to see the reaction of everyone when Pam came back. And I love the idea of them being married come the start of next season.
10 [Report This]Date: May 18, 2008 04:19 pm Title: Chapter 1
Squee! I loved this so much, definitely one of my favorite post-finale fics I've read (and I've read a lot of them!). Perhaps a sequel/second chapter where Pam comes back? I don't know, I'm not a writer, but I loved this too much to see it end! Great work! :)
Author's Response: Thanks! A second chapter where Pam comes back isn't a bad idea, I'm definitely considering it!
10 [Report This]Date: May 18, 2008 03:14 pm Title: Chapter 1
This was an absolute delight, bashert. You fulfilled my wish for an elopment. Not only did you pull off a heartfelt, fresh proposal but an immediate Vegas wedding! Love it. An instant favorite.
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm crossing my fingers and hoping for an elopement. I'm really glad you liked it!
10 [Report This]Date: May 18, 2008 11:50 am Title: Chapter 1
This is so fabulous! Jim's engagement speech is love. And the shortest engagement dundie is awesome. Kelly noticing the ring is adorable. Super work.
Author's Response: Aw thanks, your review is love! I'm so glad you enjoyed it! I think Kelly would be the first to notice a new piece of bling in the office for sure.
10 [Report This]Date: May 18, 2008 09:04 am Title: Chapter 1
Cutest ever. I'm torn between hoping that really happens and knowing I'll be really pissed if Jim and Pam get married and we don't get to see it.
Author's Response: Haha, I agree. Maybe we can see it in flashbacks? That would be a nice happy medium.
10 [Report This]Date: May 18, 2008 08:24 am Title: Chapter 1
Oh, that was so sweet. I have the biggest smile on my face. Very realistic and very Jim and Pam. Loved it!
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm so glad you liked it!
Date: May 18, 2008 07:58 am Title: Chapter 1
You win the Dundie for 'post finale fic I most want to become canon'. I love it. This is about the only thing that will make up for my disappointment from Thursday.
The bookending of Jim rushing towards New York from Scranton is something the writers would totally do. And a cold open in September of Jim's hand with his wedding ring would be a nice callback to GWH. And they could tell the story of the engagement in flashback. (Heck, the cameras could tail Jim, why not?)
Author's Response: Oh thanks, I would happily take that Dundie. I will happily give up getting to see the proposal, as long as there is a ring on Pam's finger come September. rnrnI can totally see the cameras tailing Jim. I'm crossing my fingers for a happy Jim and Pam come September.
Date: May 18, 2008 07:43 am Title: Chapter 1
That was wonderful! What a great idea!
Great job!
Author's Response: Thanks!
10 [Report This]Date: May 18, 2008 07:01 am Title: Chapter 1
Perfect! This is exactly what I am hoping the writers do!
Author's Response: Me too! Crossing my fingers for a ring at least on Pam's finger once season 5 starts!
Date: May 17, 2008 10:02 pm Title: Chapter 1
Very cute!
Author's Response: Thanks!
10 [Report This]Date: May 17, 2008 09:52 pm Title: Chapter 1
I love this. Every single word. Great job!
Author's Response: Every single word huh? That's pretty awesome. Thanks!