9 [Report This]Date: June 22, 2009 01:57 pm Title: Priceless
This was such a great story. I loved all the little insights into Jim's mind, especially since he and Pam are together. I also loved the part where they decided not go take it slow anymore. I assumed the half date was when they went back to one of their places and did the horizontal rumba? ;o) Great job!
10 [Report This]Date: May 20, 2008 04:53 pm Title: Priceless
Awww, I love it. It's really adorable. I hope in the real show Pam realizes that Jim didn't propose to her because Andy had stolen his moment.
Author's Response: Thanks, JamFan4! I'm hoping so, too. I was hoping that we'd get a deleted scene that indicated this, so that we can all rest easy this summer, but so far, no go.rnthanks for reading!
9 [Report This]Date: May 20, 2008 04:02 pm Title: Priceless
"The tiny bearded tyrant of Dunder Mifflin". You should win a medal for that :)
This was a wonderful fic. It tugged at my heartstrings, and I can't thank you enough for ending it on a happy note... I've been needing something like this ever since the finale. And I really liked how you had Toby strike a chord with Jim -- I love the idea that Roy and Jim and Toby all have these parallels, all being pining after the same woman. In particular I always thought that Jim, more than anyone, must know exactly how Toby feels. And, of course, the stuff of Jim buying a ring was just squee-worthy adorable. I eagerly await more of your work!
Author's Response: Your review is so nice, cloudyskies. I just blushed a little. Thanks! I have kind of a sequel mapped out in my head, but it may take a few days to actually make it to my fingers to type it out. I'm still new at this fic thing, so I can't crank them out like some of the pros! Thanks again for reading.
5 [Report This]Date: May 20, 2008 01:37 pm Title: Priceless
Awwwww! That was really sweet. I liked it a lot. Also, four grand for a 1.5 ct solitaire diamond with excellent clarity set in platnium? What a bargain! At that price he should have bought two :)
Author's Response: I know, I know, lol. I spent an unusual amount of time researching cost for a ring of this type, but ultimately decided to keep it within Jim's paper salesman budget. Two months' salary last forever, depending on commission :-) Thanks for reviewing, NiceJammies!
9 [Report This]Date: May 20, 2008 01:22 pm Title: Priceless
I really liked that you made Jim sympathetic to Toby. Toby has been sort of creepy lately, but I don't think Jim would get all "Roy" on him. I especially liked this:
Jim watches Meredith take a picture of Toby with Pam, then two, then three, and realizes that he can sympathize with the guy in a kind of twisted way. He wonders if this is what Roy used to feel like -- watching from a distance while some other guy tried in vain to woo Pam away from him.
Anyway, very nice glimpse into Jim's head.
Author's Response: Thanks, Wendolf! This is my first foray into Office fic, so I'm happy to see it well-received :-)