1 [Report This]Date: November 19, 2020 11:50 pm Title: there's nothing simple when i'm not around you
This just feels so accurate to this moment and their emotions about it - the sort of awful anticipation of waiting to be with her again heightened to the worst possible level just before he finally gets her back for good.
Date: June 05, 2008 10:22 pm Title: there's nothing simple when i'm not around you
Lovely mixture of clingy Jim fluff and humor. I've never laughed so hard at the first paragraph before. Good job!!
ps. won't be the longest summer if you keep writing for us. Just saying :)
Date: May 22, 2008 04:43 pm Title: there's nothing simple when i'm not around you
Eeeeeee! SO adorable. I can totally imagine this happening in the fall when she comes back. Great job!
Author's Response: Eeeee, thank you bebitched!
Date: May 22, 2008 01:43 pm Title: there's nothing simple when i'm not around you
This is lovely, I like how you've managed to really get a sense of Jim's impatience for her return through the story. I got all jumpy and excited just reading this :)
Author's Response: Hee, thank you shootingstars! I'm so glad you enjoyed it and thanks for taking the time to review!
Date: May 22, 2008 12:35 pm Title: there's nothing simple when i'm not around you
I want more!
Author's Response: Hmm, maybe, if it ever strikes me to continue this. Thanks so much for reading, ISayOye!