Date: June 01, 2008 06:09 pm Title: Act One
I'm really enjoying this. Everyone is so in character and it plays out just like an episode. Very funny. Can't wait to see more.
Author's Response: I'm glad that you find it in character, that's basically what I'm trying to do first and foremost. I appreciate you taking the time to review, and thanks for the kind words EverybodyHurts.
10 [Report This]Date: June 01, 2008 11:29 am Title: Act One
Hillarious! So very in character of everyone in the office. I'm impressed with you script formating.
Question: Isn't it driving you insane though? I know when I wrote a chapter of all phone calls and emails all the formating almost killed me.
Anyway love the gold stars and the Jim hijinx was perfect. Really looking forward to more.
Author's Response: To answer your question, the formatting does drive me insane. Yes. I have another story that involves a lot of bolding and italics and that is also a pain. But with the spaces and the centering, it always takes me a couple attempts to get it looking right, or at least somewhat alright. Thanks for the review Jewelsy, I appreciate it.
Date: May 31, 2008 09:57 pm Title: Act One
Nice!! I enjoyed reading this - very true to characters. I can see Angela not liking Holly - though it never occurred to me before. Thanks, looking forward to more!
Author's Response: MintChocolateChip!! Hi, thank you very much for the compliment and taking the time to review. Yes, I figured like with the Stamford people that Angela wouldn't like Holly. Not that there is any reason for it, just because she's Angela.
8 [Report This]Date: May 31, 2008 08:39 pm Title: Act One
I'm looking forward to reading the lengths people will go to to earn gold stars. Interesting and original idea for an Office fanfic.
Author's Response: I'm glad that you liked the concept. I wanted to do something in-office that could sort of pit people against each other in office politics that sometimes can get out of hand over really simple things. And yes, things are going to get heated for that coveted week's paid vacation. Thanks for taking the time jinx.
10 [Report This]Date: May 31, 2008 06:41 pm Title: Act One
great job! PLEASE keep writing!
Author's Response: I definitely will! I write a little slower then some people, but hopefully good things come to those who wait. I appreciate your kind words and taking the time to review ireallylovetheoffice.
10 [Report This]Date: May 31, 2008 06:30 pm Title: The Cold Open
lol loved it!
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad that you liked it ireallylovetheoffice, and thank you for taking the time to review.
10 [Report This]Date: May 31, 2008 04:17 pm Title: Act One
I hereby give this story five gold stars.
Author's Response: Haha, thank you RomanCandle. I appreciate you taking the time to review and giving me 5 stars, that's very nice of you.
10 [Report This]Date: May 31, 2008 03:13 pm Title: The Cold Open
I've said it before, but you really have a knack for the rhythm of the show. Keep it up, and I can't wait to read more!
Author's Response: I really appreciate your compliment Wendy Blue, and thank you for taking the time to review.
Date: May 30, 2008 08:54 am Title: The Cold Open
"I'm feral" :D:D Act One please!
Author's Response: Act One is coming, I promise! I'm glad that you liked the line about Dwight being feral , and thanks for taking the time to review untherapy, it's awesome that you did!
10 [Report This]Date: May 28, 2008 10:59 am Title: The Cold Open
Yay, new script fic by my favorite author! I really enjoy your writing (clearly), and this style makes it feel like we broke into the set in Palo Alto or wherever they film the Office and stole into the writers room. Awesome stuff.
Author's Response: Wow, what a nice review, thank you so much Jordon. I always appreciate reviews from you, they're so nice. I'm glad that you've liked it so far, and hopefully you'll continue to as I work on it.
Date: May 28, 2008 04:00 am Title: The Cold Open
"My pheromones are overpoweringly strong at the moment.
(looks directly into camera)
I’m feral."
You have no idea how much that line grossed me out lmao! Especially since that sounds SO much like something Dwight would say!
OK the is only exactly like the show! It's hilarious! You really are one of the best (fake) Office writers lol. Update! REALLY soon!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for the kind words! I'm glad that that line grossed you out, it was definitely my intention for people's reaction to be sort of "ewww" to that. I appreciate you taking the time to review Snoznoodle.
8 [Report This]Date: May 27, 2008 06:19 pm Title: The Cold Open
I’m feral. Funniest line ever! I have a feeling I'm going to like this--it feels real.
Author's Response: I'm glad that it feels real, I went back and forth on Dwight's "vagina" line because you'd probably not see that in an episode, but oh well, I liked it. Thank you for the kind words, and taking the time to review NanReg.
Date: May 27, 2008 06:07 pm Title: The Cold Open
liked the start...kinda weird formatting, but if you stick to it it will work...can't wait to see what happens
Author's Response: Yes, the formatting can be a little tricky with script-fic. It's definitely different than normals fics, so it can get confusing or just different I guess. But thanks for the kind words and taking the time to review dancer288, I appreciate it.
Date: May 27, 2008 06:02 pm Title: The Cold Open
Gosh this is just like a real episode! I really want to read more!
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm glad that you liked it, and that it felt real to you. Thats a really nice compliment. Thank you for taking the time to review dentalhydraplostion, I really appreciate it.
Date: May 27, 2008 05:11 pm Title: The Cold Open
Really funny and gross. I can totally see this being a cold open for the show. I am writting my own post season 4 fic. I'd love to hear your feed back on mine: After the fireworks. Keep it up I'd love to read more.
Author's Response: I'll definitely check out your story, Jewelsy. I haven't had a chance to read too much fic lately, (thus my little disclaimer). Thank you for the kind words and taking the time to review, I appreciate it.
10 [Report This]Date: May 27, 2008 04:59 pm Title: The Cold Open
Haha, this was great! Really love the way you write script-fic too, and can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Thanks you so much oobadnama! I'm glad that you enjoyed it, and continue to enjoy what's to come. Thanks for taking the time to review.
Date: May 27, 2008 04:05 pm Title: The Cold Open
You write amazing script-fic. Can't wait to read more!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your kind words and taking the time to review. I do enjoy doing script-fic, even though I know its not that popular a format to do writing on. Thanks again, Wendy Blue.