1 [Report This]Date: September 28, 2020 07:27 pm Title: May and September 2005
"It’s moments like those that make her want to ask Jim a question about what, exactly, they are, that she hasn’t quite defined in her head. She wonders how she could be terrified of the answer when she doesn’t even know the question."
Aw, man. It is heart-breaking that this one didn't get finished, because this does a REALLY good job of painting Pam's state of mind regarding the J situation in a way that actually fits with her reaction on Casino Night.
10 [Report This]Date: February 24, 2009 08:10 pm Title: March 2007
david wallace = totally hottest man in The Office who is not Jim!
Love this series!!
Date: June 27, 2008 10:13 pm Title: March 2007
I'll admit David is pretty cute. But I've got a little thing for temps at corporate..as much as I hate him, Ryan's beard is adorable. David's just good looking, though. I like how you made him a lot like he was in Cocktails, just an all-around likable guy. Great fic, can't wait for the last chapter!
Author's Response: Ahhh, David Wallace... yeah, I think he's all-around likable. Though I think if he ever goes crazy, it's because he hates Kendall just like Michael hates/hated Toby. rnrnYeah, Ryan's pretty hot. I was kind of drooling over him in, of all episodes, "Did I Stutter?", where he wasn't exactly acting admirably.rnrnThe last chapter might be...a while from now. I have a couple written, but they're all AWFUL. I've concentrated my energies elsewhere, I fear.rnrnThanks for your review again!
Date: June 27, 2008 10:05 pm Title: May and September 2005
"Or should I say...Scott."
Okay, that was scary. I'm loving this fic and am definitely heading for the next chapter!
Author's Response: haha. Yeah, pretty horrifying. Glad to hear you liked it; thanks for your review!
Date: June 12, 2008 08:28 pm Title: November 2006
OOOH loved loved loved the description of Jim's smile from behind. Andy smeels good huh? I could totally imagine that for some strange reason, and I love the double entendre "I think I found the love of my life." Kick ass chapter.
Author's Response: Why, thank you! Yeah, I picture Andy having excellent grooming products for whatever reason.
Date: June 11, 2008 10:47 am Title: March 2005
I don't think you were too harsh on Ryan at all. It's a pretty accurate and insightful portrait of him, especially considering season 4! And a very nice contrast to Jim's first day.
Author's Response: Thanks again!
Date: June 11, 2008 09:08 am Title: March 2002
Very interesting way to get inside Pam's head. I like it! And I like how realistically you explained the way that Darryl affected her. Size and voice. Such simple things but I'm sure we can all relate.
Author's Response: Thank you!
Date: June 10, 2008 08:49 pm Title: March 2002
Awesome summary. Mattresses have more fun.
Author's Response: Thanks. Angela knows what's up.
Date: June 05, 2008 05:28 pm Title: March 2005
No! you were not too hard on Ryan. I think you captured his nature quite well. I often think about the british version of "the temp" he was so much cuter than our Ryan. If they had cast someone like that maybe our Jim would have had competion. I like how you turned the story into more Jim and Pam background notes.
Author's Response: Thank you, again. I think BJ Novak is really cute, but yeah, he's got nothing on Krasinski...
10 [Report This]Date: June 05, 2008 05:22 pm Title: July 2002
I liked this story alot. The Darryl story was cute too. I love the idea that you had of writting a series of the men Pam was interseted in.
I absolutely love how you wrote that they were totally public yet intimate. So true. All the looks they exchange have a bedroom quality about them. I Look forward to reading more.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I look forward to reading more of "After the Fireworks."
Date: June 05, 2008 10:19 am Title: March 2002
Haha, great concept. This piece cracks me up.
Author's Response: Thank you! I was definitely trying to make it funny at times.
Date: June 04, 2008 08:49 pm Title: May and September 2005
This story is so cute! I can't wait to see who's five & six :)
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I assure you, no one as horrifying as Michael Scott, though... almost so. Hah.
Date: May 31, 2008 02:19 pm Title: July 2002
Awesome chapter! The end was a nice surprise for me because I, too, had always thought Jim said "very nice" for the longest time (until I realized he was saying "3 nines" in one of my 34242 rewatches of that scene). I love this fic!
Author's Response: Thank you! I've watched that scene at least 34243 ;) times, and I had it all written, and then I went to verify when, exactly, he said "very nice" on OfficeQuotes, and I was like "'three nines'? SERIOUSLY?" But, yeah. Thanks again for your kind words!
9 [Report This]Date: May 31, 2008 01:05 pm Title: March 2002
This is great stuff! You really know your Pam Beesly.
Author's Response: Thank you! And I'm quite happy you think that, because I thought I wasn't, in any way, shape, or form, getting her right.
8 [Report This]Date: May 28, 2008 01:23 pm Title: March 2002
They finally agreed to this ultimate commitment and here she was, laughing like Kathleen Turner in the 1980s around other men and sneaking glances at their faces across a room as if she was still in high school. Great line. Nice start!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! Hopefully you'll like other chapters even more. :)