10 [Report This]Date: July 12, 2008 08:43 am Title: Chapter 2
I like this chapter even better than the first. It is realistic, and I can definitely see Pam having this kind of insecurity. Keep up the good work.
Date: June 07, 2008 09:15 pm Title: Chapter 1
I really enjoyed this. It was hard to see Jim doing that to Pam, but I can understand where he is coming from. I would love to see more of where this goes.
Date: June 05, 2008 04:16 pm Title: Chapter 1
Could you PLEASE stop telling people to review "even if they hate it" because seriously, it's impossible to hate your work. At first, I was getting angry at you because I thought you wrote a fic about Jim and Pam breaking up. But then I read on and I like you again. Great job!
Date: June 03, 2008 04:20 pm Title: Chapter 1
I really loved this. Very well-written, true to character and a nice change of pace. I wouldn't say no to a second chapter. :-)
Date: May 29, 2008 03:40 am Title: Chapter 1
Gosh! You better keep them together or else *shakes fists* but it still is a good story.
Date: May 29, 2008 03:40 am Title: Chapter 1
Gosh! You better keep them together or else *shakes fists* but it still is a good story.
Date: May 28, 2008 10:36 pm Title: Chapter 1
I was really touched by this one, just because I know what it's like to be in a long-distance relationship. You really captured just how difficult it is and how complicated feelings can get when you don't see each other every day. The line, "I don’t know if I can keep watching you leave" really struck a chord. It was perfect. Nice job!
Date: May 28, 2008 10:29 pm Title: Chapter 1
Angsty and emotional without being melodramatic. I liked this piece a lot, and how you showed cracks in the relationship. Great job :).