Date: December 26, 2006 02:56 pm Title: Chapter 1
omg this was brilliant! you should wirte a sequel, or maybe a version of what jim was going through during that time
Author's Response:
aw, thanx very much!
10 [Report This]Date: September 18, 2006 11:43 am Title: Chapter 1
That was your first fan fic? It was awesome. I almost felt like I was vicariously experiencing Pam's panic and confusion. And Michael would so do something like that and then totally have no idea why it was wrong. Great character voices. I thought you did an especially good job with Jim, considering he only appeared by fax. Really excellent. Please write more.
Author's Response: Well, thank very much. I started to write more for Jim, but somehow it wasn't working, so I really appreciate the comment.
Date: September 17, 2006 12:16 am Title: Chapter 1
Aww! This was a really sweet story. One detail I liked in particular was Pam using the idea of a blank sheet to center herself - as an artist, I know *I* find blank paper very comforting. I like that Pam has to be the one to get her ass in gear in the fac of Jim's overwhelming sweetness. I hope we get to see some of that next season - I think she deserves to have to take the initiative!
Author's Response:
I totally do the paper thing myself, but I thought it would make sense for Pam as well. Cool to find someone who gets that. Anyhow, thanx for the feedback!
10 [Report This]Date: September 16, 2006 08:25 pm Title: Chapter 1
omg, i loved it! can you continue this, please? i love how jim looked after her
Author's Response: Thanx, I glad you enjoyed it. I can't decide whether to contine, but I appreciate the request :)
10 [Report This]Date: September 16, 2006 08:25 pm Title: Chapter 1
omg, i loved it! can you continue this, please? i love how jim looked after her
8 [Report This]Date: September 16, 2006 06:11 pm Title: Chapter 1
Great first fic (really, just great fic!). I enjoyed it a lot. You had Michael's voice/rationale nailed. I loved that Jim immediately stepped up and Michael got dressed down! Really, really good job. Can't wait to read more from you.
Author's Response: I feel overwhelmed to get such great reviews from you guys(and over at TWOP) You all have such amazing work yourselves. So, yea, thankyou!!
10 [Report This]Date: September 16, 2006 04:57 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oh, that's brilliant. The poster is pure Michael.
I loved Jim's save: always so chivalrous and sweet. And yay for Pam finally making a good decision!
Author's Response:
Brilliant you say? Oh, stop...no don't! :) I'm glad you enjoyed it. I was conflicted whether she should come to a realization so quick, but it kinda just wrote itself that way. ok, enough babbling, thnx again.
10 [Report This]Date: September 16, 2006 02:30 pm Title: Chapter 1
That was great! The fact that he automatically considers her problems to be his problems too is the sweetest thing ever, and yay for her finally realizing it!
Author's Response:
Thankyou! It just felt like it was something Jim would do, like an automatic response. God, Halpert has ruined me for all real men. :) thnx, again
7 [Report This]Date: September 16, 2006 02:29 pm Title: Chapter 1
I can't really believe this is your first attempt at fanfiction...great job!
Author's Response:
Oh, gosh. Thankyou so much, it's the first real writing I've attempted in almost a decade. But how can one not be sucked into all that Jammy goodness? Ok, that sounded dirty.
10 [Report This]Date: September 16, 2006 01:33 pm Title: Chapter 1
Great story! I want to join the others asking for a second chapter! This was such a cute idea, and so like Michael!
Author's Response: Thanx so much for the feedback! Oh, the siren call of more chapters *be strong, Jen,be strong*
8 [Report This]Date: September 16, 2006 11:18 am Title: Chapter 1
that was great but I want more!!!
Author's Response: Actually, I tried to write out more, but it didn't feel right. Maybe when I have better skills :) Thanks for the review!
10 [Report This]Date: September 16, 2006 07:19 am Title: Chapter 1
Congrats on your first story!!! I really enjoyed it!
Author's Response: I was so nervous about submitting this because of all the amazing fic already here. So happy you liked it! Thankyou.
10 [Report This]Date: September 16, 2006 07:06 am Title: Chapter 1
You have to add another Chapter. PLEASE!
Author's Response: Gah, ya'll are killing me! Second chapter, second chapter...hmm, do I have it in me? Maybe a new story from Jim's pov? Anyhow, thnx very much!
8 [Report This]Date: September 16, 2006 06:57 am Title: Chapter 1
This is totally the kind of idea Michael would come up with! Well done! :)
Author's Response: Yep, I figured he would be so obtuse, and like, what's wrong? So fun to write. Thanx so much!
9 [Report This]Date: September 16, 2006 06:34 am Title: Chapter 1
This is so great! You have all the secondary characters down perfectly (Michael, Jan, Phyllis, Angela), and of course Pam is spot-on. *sigh* Jim, our knight in shining armor! Very engaging!
Author's Response:
Don't we need all need a Jim? Thanks so much for your review. I'm all giddy ova here. :)
Date: September 16, 2006 04:35 am Title: Chapter 1
Fantastic job on a first fic. God. Michael is a total ass. You've really honed in on their voices. Jan came across especially well.
Oh and I also wanted to mention this is begging for a second chapter. ;)
Author's Response:
Oh, you guys are super cool. Yea, I hoped Jan would come across right, considering she doesn't get as much to say. Thanx, and I'm starting to consider the second chapter thing....oh boy
8 [Report This]Date: September 16, 2006 04:15 am Title: Chapter 1
An interesting premise. So funny! Michael is such an ass.
More! More! More!
Author's Response:
He totally is, right? I'm so glad you liked it...and actually want more! Oh, now I'm nervous. Thanx!
7 [Report This]Date: September 15, 2006 11:26 pm Title: Chapter 1
Wow - the poster sounds exactly like something Michael would come up with. Your dialogue for him sounds great, as does your inner monologue for Pam. Congrats on your first fic!
Author's Response: Thankyou! I actually loved trying to figure out Michael's dialogue, he's such a goof. Thanks again.
10 [Report This]Date: September 15, 2006 10:59 pm Title: Chapter 1
No! You can't stop there! This is so good. I've never read anything quite like this before, and the premise is completely perfect and suits the show amazingly well. Wonderful.
Author's Response: Wow, thank you so much! Something I worried about the most was the originality. So glad you enjoyed it.