1 [Report This]Date: January 21, 2019 02:08 pm Title: ACT III
I really am not a fan of script fic. But I can honestly say the exception is if it’s written by kgreene... I love this!
Date: June 03, 2010 06:09 pm Title: Cold Open and Act I
This was very sweet. It's a crime that we didn't get to see the Beeslys meet Jim - one of the many squandered opportunities of seasons 4 and 5. And I liked the structure and pacing: e.g., dropping Stanley's unexpected praise for Jim in the middle of the chaos of Act III. Well done!
Author's Response: Thank you! Honestly, I haven't read this script is a long time .I need to go over it again, although I probably won't like it now... lol... Thanks again!
Date: June 06, 2008 09:24 am Title: ACT III
This is super entertaining. The whole thing with Jim photographing ghosts is so classic; great way to pull Pam into the prank at the end there. And your Michael is really true to character. He's hard to write...well done!
Author's Response: Wow, thanks! I really, really try to make Michael seem true to the show. He can be a little tricky. Dwight as well. I really appreciate you saying that. Thanks!
8 [Report This]Date: June 06, 2008 07:42 am Title: ACT III
Well done! The whole "fact" finding scene made me laugh out loud--I could envision it : ) Also, very sweet portrayal of Pam and her mom.
Author's Response: Hey, thanks! I wanted to make sure that the fact-finding gag was understandable without having to really spell it out. Glad you liked it!
Date: June 06, 2008 07:02 am Title: ACT III
haha. loved it!!
Author's Response: Thanks!
Date: June 05, 2008 11:37 am Title: Cold Open and Act I
This is great! I was laughing out loud so hard! Please continue!
Author's Response: Will do! Thanks!
Date: June 05, 2008 08:35 am Title: ACT II
I think you've captured these characters perfect. I really want more. Like now. Seriously.
Author's Response: Lol.. wow. So demanding. lol.. Tomorrow, I promise!
8 [Report This]Date: June 05, 2008 07:06 am Title: ACT II
The Michael Scott Experience at Great Adventure (Exit 7A on the NJ Turnpike, now THAT takes me back)! Not for the weak of stomach, pregnant women, people with heart conditions or back problems... Ha! Love it!
Author's Response: LOL... that's hilarious! And yeah, I thought anyone in the Northeast would feel a bit of nostalgia hearing Great Adventure. Thanks!
Date: June 04, 2008 12:09 pm Title: Cold Open and Act I
Niiice. Can I just say that your Michael moments are spot-on?? Your writing is truly funny, and I find myself actually mixing up scenes you have so vividly described, with the real show. Why aren't you an actual writer on the show???
Author's Response: Boy... from your lips to Greg Daniel's ears.. lol.. thank you so much!
8 [Report This]Date: June 04, 2008 11:25 am Title: Cold Open and Act I
Good start, Kevin! AU or not, I'm enjoying it very much--especially the emotion. I'm really glad you didn't cut back on it. In fact, overage fangirl that I am, this gave me butterflies: I… probably shouldn’t have said that. Lately Pam has been a little…withdrawn. And I have been all full throttle, like a dope, telling her all I’m feeling. Which is… a lot. (pause) I hope I’m not scaring her. I just want to make sure… she feels the same way. (looks down) I hope she does.
Makes me think that, considering he bought her a ring one week into the relationship, he probably was feeling this way. More soon, please!
Author's Response: Thank, Nan! I probably would not have changed that bit with Jim, I've always kinda liked that. I definitely wanted to show how serious he is about Pam. Thanks again!