Date: June 16, 2008 09:42 pm Title: Chapter 1
Hilarious, especially don't ruin this velvet box. Really great!!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! :)
Date: June 05, 2008 08:23 pm Title: Chapter 1
Haha. This was great! The line "Slide that box back in your pocket dipwad" was awesome!
Author's Response: Hee, thanks! :)
10 [Report This]Date: June 05, 2008 05:50 pm Title: Chapter 1
Yes! Jim would have totally had really simple gut responces to this event. I really liked the style of writing that you used to convey Jims thoughts. Who would call themselves Nard Dog anyway?
I'd love it if you would read my story After the fireworks and tell me what you think. Maybe you could follow up this story with a chapter on Pam's thoughts. I'd like that.
Author's Response:
Thanks! I really like writing this way too. I have another story posted called What Hurts the Most that was actually at one point a back and forth style between Jim and Pam's thoughts. It got a little out of control and I ended up taking it back down to the original first chapter, but it was fun nonetheless. I have just created a series I call Ruminations so I plan on writing more "thought" style stories but they'll mostly be stand alones.
I'd love to read your story. I'll check it out and let you know my thoughts for sure!
Date: June 04, 2008 11:10 pm Title: Chapter 1
I love the not quite all that linear stream of consciousness thing you do. Lord knows that my thoughts don't stay all that on target even under the most serious of situations. Mmm... pie...
Author's Response:
Exactly. :)
I love that you read my not quite linear stream of consciousness.