Date: December 15, 2008 04:33 pm Title: Angela's Decisions
Instead of this, we have... well, I'm not sure if you've seen Moroccan Christmas yet. But instead of this, we had that episode.
Author's Response: Haven't watched MC yet, still! I think this last chapter makes the story kind of AU now. Now, I hate Dwight and I love Andy. I just feel so sad for Andy and before, I was feeling sad for Dwight because he didn't get the girl. I want to say, I do not like Dwight and Angela right now and Andy seems like such a poor soul :(
Date: December 15, 2008 04:26 pm Title: Pam couldn't.
I really like this.Just the imagery of her fiddling with her ring (which I do all the time), and recalling all the past moments with Jim, and that being the catalyst for more.
and I love the final line:
The decisions she had made left 3 hearts broken to a thousand pieces.
Author's Response: Thank you! I always think Pam recalls her moments with Jim, even when she was with Roy. I'm glad you found this chapter nice :DrnrnrnThe last line was just... you know, i always thought she made alot of bad decisions from season 1 to 3 so that last line seemed to tie up the entire story together, don't you think?
Date: September 14, 2008 08:44 am Title: Angela's Decisions
Well done! Thanks for writing - it was sweet!
Author's Response: Thank you! That was very sweet of you :D
Date: June 28, 2008 08:51 pm Title: Pam's acceptions.
This was a nice follow up to your first chapter. I liked your inner monologue of Pam. I love it when people review my stuff too. Look me up won't you. I'd love to hear what you think of my stories.
Author's Response: Thanks! I was hoping you'd like it. Pam is a very interesting character (in the first 3 seasons) so I had to write that inner monologue. I have read some of your stories, actually and I really like some of them! Again, thanks so much for reviewing :D
10 [Report This]Date: June 08, 2008 07:37 pm Title: Pam couldn't.
Oh my God. This is so true. Can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: Thanks! I was really hoping people would like it, so I'm awfully glad you did!
10 [Report This]Date: June 05, 2008 05:41 pm Title: Pam couldn't.
I don't have anything harsh to say. I loved it. I really liked the literary tool of how Pam fidgeted with her ring as she thought about her choices. I would love it if you continue. I think the Jim Karen angle should totally be addressed. I'm sure Pam must have stressed about that. Hey I'd love it if you would read my story After the fireworks and let me know what you think.
Author's Response: Well, thanks for the kind comment. I also think I should go ahead with Jim/Karen. It will be a bit harder though but I think I must take on challenges!rnHmm, how would I say this nicely? I don't really read MA fics because it's not really my type. Sorry!! I would love to read it if it weren't MA. Maybe on a later date. Plus, the reviews you've gotten on the story show me that people think your story is fantastic. I will read it. Perhaps later. Or, you tell me the chapters which are very explicit. I don't like 'explicit sexual content' kind of stories. I read fics with, you know, feelings of Pam and Jim and all. So yeah. Let me know which chapters are like those and I promise to read it and tell you how I feel, k?
7 [Report This]Date: June 05, 2008 12:29 pm Title: Pam couldn't.
Looking forward to the next chapter. I think you captured the "feeling" of a conflicted Pam very well.
Two thumbs up :)
Author's Response: Thanks for the awfully sweet comment. I have been reading Momentary Courage too and I really like it! I am looking forward to the reviews from the next chapter I will put up too!
10 [Report This]Date: June 05, 2008 07:09 am Title: Pam couldn't.
oooooooo interesting. keep writing! i love it. pam's feelings about most of the big JAM interactions. LOVE it!
Author's Response: Thanks!! I would have thought that most people would've given me pretty bad reviews. So, THANKS!!!