Date: November 29, 2006 10:50 pm Title: Chapter 1
Very nice job on the tension in the bedroom! Great!
8 [Report This]Date: September 18, 2006 06:35 am Title: Chapter 1
Nicely done. It is a very sexy pic of him.
Author's Response: Thank you and too true!
8 [Report This]Date: September 18, 2006 06:31 am Title: Chapter 1
Absolutely perfect! I love your description of their interaction at Jim's, seriously, it is so them, the almost-going-to-happen moment. Wonderful!
Author's Response: Thank you so much. I really have nothing more than that - "so them" is such an amazing compliment.
10 [Report This]Date: September 17, 2006 07:51 pm Title: Chapter 1
all so real (and so hot!)--like the way you portrayed her inner thought process and her denial--it seemed very pam-like.
Author's Response: Ah, thank you, thank you
9 [Report This]Date: September 17, 2006 10:43 am Title: Chapter 1
Stupid Pam. This was fantastically real.
Author's Response: Thanks; I appreciate that.
9 [Report This]Date: September 17, 2006 08:36 am Title: Chapter 1
I think you did a great job! You managed to make it sexy and full of heat, which is hard to do. Well done!
Author's Response: Thanks so much - very insecure.
10 [Report This]Date: September 17, 2006 08:13 am Title: Chapter 1
Love, love LOVE this. So beautifully erotic - from the scene in his bedroom, to the scene at his front door, till the end. Awesome job!
Author's Response: Thank you, thank you, THANK YOU. I really appreciate that.
Date: September 17, 2006 04:29 am Title: Chapter 1
Would never have known this was your, ahem, maiden voyage into the steamy zone. Reads like the work of an old pro. Jim just seems to bring it out in a girl, doesn't he? Love that you provided the visual aid (I also posted a JAM story a while back based on a photo of JF - never occured to me to link it until now! Very clever.)
Author's Response:
Thank you. I felt kind of skeazy...although, I have no problem reading it - writing it seems different. Ahh, Jim...yes he does bring it out in a girl. Yum.
10 [Report This]Date: September 16, 2006 10:15 pm Title: Chapter 1
Um. First of all. That picture? Hottttttttttttt. Oh the beauty of John Krasinski.
She feels like a really bad person. <--- That's a huge part of Pam's ambivalent behavior regarding Jim - she doesn't want to feel like a bad person or do something that would make her seem like one. I enjoyed this. Poor Pam.
Author's Response: Thank you very much. Yes, that picture is just too...everything.