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Reviewer: grapejelly Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: April 13, 2009 08:56 pm Title: Chapter 1

Sweet.

Reviewer: uglyscientist Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: February 06, 2009 06:19 pm Title: Chapter 1

He draped his arm around her shoulders, and she settled against him, and he checked off an item on his mental list, Things I Desperately Want to Do.

i love that line.

Reviewer: Hannah_Halpert Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: October 09, 2008 08:13 pm Title: Chapter 1

Squishy and cuteee :)

Reviewer: kaystar Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: June 27, 2008 08:36 pm Title: Chapter 1

Such a sweet, happy story. I love how Jim insisted on seeing her yearbook picture.  Very cute!

Reviewer: iheartcreed Signed [Report This]
Date: June 18, 2008 09:48 pm Title: Chapter 1

This story?...as perfect as Jim and Pam. Love their banter, "we're not aweful" especially, and his mental list was just too funny. Adore the ending!!!

Reviewer: bitterpill Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: June 18, 2008 06:14 am Title: Chapter 1

Love first date stories and am glad for your contribution.  Very them and very sweet.  Thanks for this!

Reviewer: NanReg Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: June 17, 2008 08:37 am Title: Chapter 1

Nice job!  Very natural dialog.  I liked it : )

Reviewer: khand3stooges Signed [Report This]
Date: June 15, 2008 03:06 pm Title: Chapter 1

I really like this.  Very them!

Reviewer: grapejelly Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: June 14, 2008 09:49 pm Title: Chapter 1

Sweet.

Reviewer: jillyree Signed [Report This]
Date: June 14, 2008 09:18 pm Title: Chapter 1

Very them.  Good job!

Reviewer: honeypioneer Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: June 14, 2008 09:10 pm Title: Chapter 1

Very cute...sweet and simple :)

Reviewer: Morning Angel Signed [Report This]
Date: June 14, 2008 08:39 pm Title: Chapter 1

That was a very cute and sweet story.  Well done! :)

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