1 [Report This]Date: January 30, 2019 02:33 am Title: Chapter 1
So beautiful! Thank you!
9 [Report This]Date: September 17, 2006 06:36 pm Title: Chapter 1
That was a lovely little window into Jim's thoughts. Loved it.
10 [Report This]Date: September 17, 2006 06:00 pm Title: Chapter 1
this was lovely--so very jim. i could really see these thoughts going through his head. love the way you tackled this scene.
10 [Report This]Date: September 17, 2006 05:48 pm Title: Chapter 1
This is probably my favorite version of this moment so far. Honestly, it's so in character and beautiful. The scene made me cry and so did this.
He secretly wonders if that’s what she looks like when-
That was my favorite line. So Jim, to cut that thought off right there. We've seen him do that a few times on the show, just shake himself out of it. Loved this.
9 [Report This]Date: September 17, 2006 05:45 pm Title: Chapter 1
The toast scene definitely pulled at my heartstrings (poor Jim!), and this little gem you've written filled it out nicely.
8 [Report This]Date: September 17, 2006 04:22 pm Title: Chapter 1
But he wasn’t, and she didn’t.
Very nice, oypoodle! That deleted scene is such a heartbreaker.
Glad to see you post fic here - you should bring Can't Be Held Responsible over from ff.net.
8 [Report This]Date: September 17, 2006 04:17 pm Title: Chapter 1
But he wasn’t, and she didn’t.
Very nice, oypoodle! That deleted scene is such a heartbreaker.
Glad to see you post fic here - you should bring Can't Be Held Responsible over from ff.net.
Author's Response: Thanks! :) And I think I might.
10 [Report This]Date: September 17, 2006 03:09 pm Title: Chapter 1
Poor, poor Jim. Nice story.
8 [Report This]Date: September 17, 2006 02:00 pm Title: Chapter 1
This is lovely, and sad. You really capture how Jim must feel. Great job!