10 [Report This]Date: August 07, 2008 09:28 pm Title: built a wall around my heart, never let it fall apart
I love the description of the harbor with the rain coming in. It seems like just the right weather to match what's going on between them. :-)
Author's Response: Thanks Moxie! I feel like, at this point, Pam is in a sad, scary place and it would have felt weird to me if they were having this perfect, sunny, early-spring day when she is feeling so much turmoil right now. I really did want the weather to sort of set that mood and I'm glad you feel it worked! yay! Thanks for reading and reviewing, as always :)
10 [Report This]Date: August 07, 2008 08:48 pm Title: built a wall around my heart, never let it fall apart
Her softly saying "I think I'm gonna leave Roy" is one of my favorite moments in a fic ever, I think. It's a surprise to the reader (as I'm sure it was to Jim) but very real. There is something satisfying about Pam sort of suddenly coming to that conclusion with little drama or outward emotion.
I do love this story so much. Truly one of my very favorites ever.
Author's Response:
Wow brokenloon - thank you so much for the kind review.
I went back and forth with this chapter and how to approach this visit with them. I decided I wanted it to be a little more quiet, understated. Pam strikes me as that type of person - and it rubs me the wrong way when she comes off as too dramatic and so I'm glad that you feel it came across the way it did.
I really look forward to and appreciate your reviews. You've been such an awesome supporter of this story from the beginning and I truly do value that. Thank you so much!
Date: August 07, 2008 08:46 pm Title: built a wall around my heart, never let it fall apart
I can't take the suspense. I love the out of the blue twist and I actually whispered Pam. You are a great writer and I need another hit. Hurry Please.
Author's Response: Thank you so, so much for the kind words, Orfice Flan. I'm working on getting that next chapter up, I promise!Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Date: August 07, 2008 08:37 pm Title: built a wall around my heart, never let it fall apart
Yeah, Pam & Jim, have an Ironman Pale Ale for me!
(But if you want to do serious drinking, you need to head to Fell's Point -- or if you want to Eat Bertha's Mussels).
And an 'attagirl' to Pam for not crying to Jim about Roy.
Author's Response: I'm sure Pam will be having at least a few beers, I think she needs it.:) Thanks for the review!
Date: August 07, 2008 06:35 pm Title: I've been here before, one day, a week
Can't wait! I hope it's soon! Loved this chapter, kells.
Author's Response: Thanks, NanReg!
Date: August 07, 2008 11:45 am Title: I've been here before, one day, a week
Love this part: "He looks back now and wonders how he handled it every day – all nerves and sweaty palms."
And there is lots of fun to be had in Baltimore. There is a great brewpub (the Wharf Rat) right near Camden Yards. And I think you can get soft-shelled crabs at Phillips.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review lisahoo - and the suggestions. I had no idea you had such extensive baltimore knowledge :)
Date: August 07, 2008 07:35 am Title: I've been here before, one day, a week
yay! no more long breaks ok?? ok. This is such a unique story I'm loving it
Author's Response: I promise, untherapy. Thanks so much for taking the time to read and review with such kind words :)
Date: August 06, 2008 10:07 pm Title: I've been here before, one day, a week
Can't wait! Hope the update is soon!! Loving this story!
Author's Response: Hi Jinxcoke! I hope to update the next chapter tonight (probably pretty late though) - so stay tuned! Thanks for reviewing :)
10 [Report This]Date: August 06, 2008 09:55 pm Title: I've been here before, one day, a week
yay - glad to see this back! Looking forward to more. :-)
Author's Response: Hi Mox! Thanks for the kind words, and I just noticed this morning that you've been updating also. I can't wait to read it. Thanks so much for reviewing!
10 [Report This]Date: July 30, 2008 05:13 pm Title: why do you do this to me?
I've read this again, for the 3 time again. Could we expect an update anytime soon?
Author's Response: Hi DS! It's so nice to know that someone is eager for an update. Sorry it took me so long. I did post another chapter last night - it's a short one though so I should be posting the next one tonight. Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Date: July 16, 2008 09:15 pm Title: makes me wonder if I ever gave a thought about you and I
I usually don't like AU, but this is great! I'm so excited to find out what happens next and I love your characterization. Good job :)
Author's Response: Thank you, honeypioneer. I don't know how it's taken me so long to respond to your review - I'm so sorry. Thanks for the kind words, and for reading and reviewing :)
Date: July 16, 2008 08:58 am Title: makes me wonder if I ever gave a thought about you and I
Things can happen anywhere, people ;) I'm counting on it : )
Really enjoying this story, kells. This, in particular, stood out for me: She imagines climbing out of the truck and making a snow angel because she feels like she wants to leave her mark - let someone know she was there. It’s been a long time since she felt that way. She likes it.
Author's Response: Thanks so much, NanReg. I think for a long time Pam was always sort of in the background - even in her own life. She went along w/ what Roy wanted and at work she had other people sort of pushing her around. I love the idea of her standing up and making herself known, and I'm sort of going for that feel here - a slow transition into her taking back her life a bit. Thanks for the kind words! More to come soon :)
10 [Report This]Date: July 16, 2008 12:18 am Title: makes me wonder if I ever gave a thought about you and I
Very much looking forward to the next update!
Author's Response: Thanks The Temp! You should be hearing from me again in a few days :)
Date: July 15, 2008 09:10 pm Title: makes me wonder if I ever gave a thought about you and I
I really like the fact that Pam is brave enough to visit Jim. Roy doesn't have aclue and she deserves more. I can't wait for the weekend.
Author's Response: Roy really is clueless, isn't he? You know, I dated a guy like Roy for quite some time. Not a bad guy, per se, but just sort of selfish and clueless and after a while you get comfortable and sometimes people take advantage of that. Don't worry - the weekend will be here before you know it ;) Thanks for reading and reviewing, kh!
10 [Report This]Date: July 15, 2008 08:46 pm Title: makes me wonder if I ever gave a thought about you and I
I'm excited for more. More! More!! :D
I think you have a really neat AU story here and I love how you kind of keep the characters in sync but giving Pam the courage and freedom to do things that I wish she would have done... it's just great. Keep it up :) :)
Author's Response: Hey dasani - thanks for the kind words. For me, I was always curious to see how Pam would do if Jim left (pre-Casino night, that is) and she tried to branch out into art and other things while still with Roy. I always wondered how she would handle that. Also, I like the thought of Pam realizing that Roy isn't right for her on her own - as you can probably tell she's on her way :) Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Date: July 15, 2008 08:38 pm Title: makes me wonder if I ever gave a thought about you and I
Can't wait for the next chapter! Great story!
Author's Response: Hi jinxcoke! I'm hoping to have the next chapter up in a day or so, but I'm working quite a bit the next few days so sadly it might not be until Sunday-ish. Thanks for always leaving such nice reviews - I really appreciate it.
Date: July 15, 2008 08:28 pm Title: makes me wonder if I ever gave a thought about you and I
Oh, the Aquarium is one of my favorite places in the world! Is it baseball season yet? Cause Camden Yards would be a great place to have some fun too :)
Author's Response: Jenn I had thought about Camden Yards - because it's such a cool place to see a baseball game, but sadly our timeline for this story puts us a few weeks shy of training camp time, so no baseball for Jim and Pam this time around :( I too love the aquarium! Thanks for reading!
Date: July 15, 2008 07:13 pm Title: makes me wonder if I ever gave a thought about you and I
Hey there are lots of fun things to do in Baltimore! I can see them really having a good time!
Author's Response: I promise, cheezy, I have nothing but love for Baltimore. I had a family member who was at Johns Hopkins for some time so I spent quite a bit of time there growing up, and my husband went to college in Maryland so we made day trips to Baltimore and DC quite a bit. Thanks for reading and reviewing!
10 [Report This]Date: July 15, 2008 07:04 pm Title: makes me wonder if I ever gave a thought about you and I
I think given the changes Pam has already made - it's entirely believable she'd go see Jim behind Roy's back. So keep going. :-)
Author's Response: Hehe...thanks for the encouragement, Mox. You're right though - Roy is basically pushing Pam into Jim's arms. Glad it's realistic! Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Date: July 15, 2008 06:48 pm Title: makes me wonder if I ever gave a thought about you and I
Sliding Doors is a great reference -- since you're showing us a glimpse of how things might be different for Pam when they both make different choices. No booze cruise, no 27 seconds, no 're-engagement', no fight in the break room over the art internship.
And there's lots in Baltimore. They have a drive-in too -- Bengies. (Hey, they're showing 'Get Smart'!)
Author's Response:
I loved Sliding Doors. I love the possibility that one small decision could have a ripple effect that changes your whole life. Of course, I lament the loss of the 27 seconds in this story, because it's a touchstone of the Jim and Pam story, but that's okay. No "re-engagement" is the most important thing, lol.
Also, who knew there was a drive-in in Baltimore? Never would have thought.
Thanks for reading and reviewing, lisahoo!
9 [Report This]Date: July 15, 2008 06:45 pm Title: makes me wonder if I ever gave a thought about you and I
I am loving this story! I like how your Pam is coming to life YEARS before the one on the show! I can barely wait for next Saturday, too!
Author's Response: Thanks, Vampiric Blood. For me, I was always curious as to how Pam could deal with a relationship w/ Roy if Jim left - pre-Casino Night, that is. I think he filled in a lot of things for her and she didn't realize it until he left. Thanks for reading and reviewing - I really appreicate your comments!
10 [Report This]Date: July 15, 2008 03:18 pm Title: I lick my wounds but I can't ever see them getting better
This is really good - can't wait for more! :-)
Author's Response: Thank you so much, Moxie!
10 [Report This]Date: July 15, 2008 10:07 am Title: I lick my wounds but I can't ever see them getting better
Still loving it...really nice job with the pacing...not rushed but not dragging either. And, speedy art school application aside, it's a completely realistic and believable depiction of the characters and their development.
Author's Response: Thanks brokenloon. That means a lot to me. For me an AU doesn't work unless I really feel that it's a realistic version of the characters we know, so I'm glad that where they are heading seems reasonable to you. I was also a bit worried about the pacing too, but I'm glad you feel it's moving along nicely. I really appreciate your reviews. Thanks again :)
Date: July 14, 2008 06:53 pm Title: I lick my wounds but I can't ever see them getting better
So glad you're back, kells! I got to re-read everything to remember what was going on, which was totally a pleasure. I'm glad they are talking again! Also I don't think it's unrealistic that Pam registered for classes at the community college so soon. Can't wait to see what else you have rolled up your sleeve!
Author's Response: Hi sudz! Thanks so much for the kind words. More to come soon!
Date: July 14, 2008 05:26 pm Title: it hurts but it may be the only way
Oh, jeez, this is why they couldn't show us what happened after Casino Night, because any goodbye scene between Jim & Pam would rip my heart out. I like how you merged the CN speeches and 'not... here'.
Author's Response: Ugh. Tell me about it. Although I would have loved to have seen a goodbye scene of any kind between Jim and Pam, heartbreaking though it may be. Thanks for the kind review, lisahoo :)