10 [Report This]Date: February 18, 2010 10:07 pm Title: we peeled the freckles from our shoulders
This was an absolutely lovely, absolutely wonderful look into that time period that we didn't get to see when they first started dating.
In addition to being sweet, the intimate moment between them was just so steamy and hot as heck!
Thanks for sharing!!
10 [Report This]Date: November 04, 2009 02:55 pm Title: we peeled the freckles from our shoulders
god, this is just so so lovely.
10 [Report This]Date: October 05, 2008 03:49 pm Title: we peeled the freckles from our shoulders
That was so sexy, but really beautifully written. Please write more like this. You have them down perfectly!!!
8 [Report This]Date: July 04, 2008 06:46 pm Title: we peeled the freckles from our shoulders
So very much to love about this story - including the last part of this sentence:
"Her cheek is heavy on his chest, her shallow breaths caressing the hair there and encouraging goose bumps to meet the moonlight on his flesh."
Author's Response: Thanks so much!
9 [Report This]Date: June 23, 2008 06:05 pm Title: we peeled the freckles from our shoulders
Um.... wow.
WOW.
Sudden heat wave here.... how curious.
Author's Response: Haha, well thank youu
9 [Report This]Date: June 23, 2008 05:04 pm Title: we peeled the freckles from our shoulders
Wow. That was really sweet and hot. You really captured Jim's inner voice well in this fic. It all sounded very real and in character, and I enjoyed the amount of detail you wrote in each comparison between Pam and Karen. Love how every time Jim tried to push his thoughts elsewhere, it always came back to Pam. The smut was hot as well :)
Author's Response: Hehe, happy you enjoyed. Thanks for the review!
Date: June 23, 2008 07:59 am Title: we peeled the freckles from our shoulders
For a story that takes place entirely between the sheets, this is some romantic stuff. Sweet and hot writing all wrapped into one.
I see that others have commented on the birds. I loved this line:
"his soundtrack has been replaced with the hopeful tones of birds hesitant to come forward before sunrise"
Author's Response: Thank you so much, Pisa!
Date: June 22, 2008 11:48 pm Title: we peeled the freckles from our shoulders
::sigh:: That was pretty amazing. Nicely done.
Author's Response: Thanks =)
9 [Report This]Date: June 22, 2008 04:15 pm Title: we peeled the freckles from our shoulders
What a fantastic story. I can't tell you how much I enjoyed this particular bit:
"Sometimes at night, when they lay close together like this, she'll reach for his ipod off the bedside table. With an earbud in his ear, the other in hers, she'll scroll through a shuffle of his music, even though they both know exactly which songs they return to every evening. He'll wait for his ear to fill with the simple melody of meandering acoustic guitar; music she playfully complains about in the car, deeming it his "artsy emo music", though eagerly seeks out only for these moments."
The visual of it I found so true to character. I could totally imagine them sharing music in bed this way. You made a wonderful little picture in my head that got me through work today. It got me thinking about a bunch of scenarios where they'd share the Ipod. So thank you for that.
It was a beautifully written, sensual oneshot. A great read. :) Thanks for posting!
Author's Response: Thanks a lot! I was listening to my ipod before writing this so.. I basically somehow wrote everything that was going on that night into the story. Minus having Jim in my bed, unfortunately, lol. Thanks for the review!
Date: June 22, 2008 07:41 am Title: we peeled the freckles from our shoulders
Sigh. Beautiful. Just Beautiful. And I was just having a conversation about the birds that think it's day time late at night!
Author's Response: Thanks so much! And those damn birds... I pretty much wrote this late at night and could hear them and that's how they ended up in the story haha.
10 [Report This]Date: June 22, 2008 12:44 am Title: we peeled the freckles from our shoulders
Oh yeah. I love well written smut fics that really capture their love and affection for one another, not just how hot their sex life is. You manage to do it all, so kudos to you! Great job!
Author's Response: Thanks a lot! That's what I was trying for, so I'm happy I succeeded =)
10 [Report This]Date: June 22, 2008 12:11 am Title: we peeled the freckles from our shoulders
Beautiful.
Author's Response: Thank you!
10 [Report This]Date: June 21, 2008 09:19 pm Title: we peeled the freckles from our shoulders
This was really good...sweet, sexy, and who wouldn't love waking up to Jim at that time of the morning and getting THAT? One little tiny thing...I think at this part:
"He finally lets his eyelids drift shit" you might have meant "shut" :)
Author's Response: LOL, yes, my friend pointed that out. I went in to edit it. But thank you!
Date: June 21, 2008 09:18 pm Title: we peeled the freckles from our shoulders
DELISH. I loved all the details about Pam's skin and her being "soft curves." This whole thing was just really intimate and honest and also hot. WRITE MORE SMUT, PLEASE.
Author's Response: Mmm. Two reviews calling it delish. I'm pretty proud right now, not gonna lie. Thanks for the review darlin'!
Date: June 21, 2008 06:14 pm Title: we peeled the freckles from our shoulders
delish. sweet with a bit of sin. good stuff.
Author's Response: hehe, thanks for reviewing!