Date: August 31, 2010 10:28 am Title: Chapter 1
Loved how you deftly took something so mundane as a paper cut and turned it into a pretext for fluff that just hit all of the soft spots in my heart. Thank you for writing this.
10 [Report This]Date: March 14, 2009 08:08 pm Title: Chapter 1
This was really cute. I loved the banter between the two of them. So natural and so sweet. Loved the fallen soldier stuff. Hee. Great work.
Date: May 16, 2007 09:11 pm Title: Chapter 1
Awww, I loved this. I loved everything about it. Particularly that ending scene with the rain and the car and the kiss.
9 [Report This]Date: September 24, 2006 10:12 am Title: Chapter 1
That was such a sweet story. You have to like a chivalrous man! :)
Author's Response:
thanx Morning Angel! Couldn't agree more, I get all flustery even if I just get the door opened for me.
8 [Report This]Date: September 20, 2006 08:50 am Title: Chapter 1
Yea for fluff! I loved Jim's thoughts throughout the day. Dwight's comment about Schrutes suturing their own wounds made me laugh out loud. Such a sweet story!
Author's Response: :) Thanx! I think Dwight is especially difficult to write for when you are trying to straddle the line between serious and ridiculous. Thanx, again.
10 [Report This]Date: September 18, 2006 11:21 pm Title: Chapter 1
So sweet! You captured Jim and Pam's voices really well, especially Jim's internal monologue. And the one kiss to heal them both - lovely prequel/allusion to The Kiss.
Yay for wonderful fluff!
Author's Response:
Yea, I was worried I couldn't write Jim well, but it turned out to be alot of fun. Appreciate the feedback! thanx!
8 [Report This]Date: September 18, 2006 06:01 pm Title: Chapter 1
Jim in a Hello Kitty bandaid is the cutest image ever. And the healing kiss at the end was so sweet :)
Author's Response: yea, but he's still manly enough to get away w/ it :) thank you very much!
Date: September 18, 2006 11:45 am Title: Chapter 1
Do not tear off your coat and give it to her, dude. Have some backbone. Hee! I love Jim's inner slightly-surfer-sounding monologue. It was the "dude" that did it for me, I think.
One of the things I really like about this is how they use the overall generalities of "men" and "women" to refer to each other.... when of course they really mean "you" and "me". That's SUCH a true-to-life surreptitious crush thing. Awesome detail. Great story!
Author's Response: heh, I never thought about 'dude' in terms of surfer lingo, but you're totally right. Mmmm, Jim on a surf board...Niice. Thanx for the feedback!
10 [Report This]Date: September 18, 2006 10:52 am Title: Chapter 1
Aw, Jim. You have their banter down PERFECTLY, and that is not an easy feat. Great job.
Author's Response: Thanx! I love jokey Pam and Jim
7 [Report This]Date: September 18, 2006 09:40 am Title: Chapter 1
Sweet. You should link this to the Injury and Rain challenges, since you said they were an inspiration. Just click on each challenge, then on "respond to this challenge", then select your story and submit.
Author's Response: Oh duh. Didn't even think of that. Thanx for the suggestion!
10 [Report This]Date: September 18, 2006 09:31 am Title: Chapter 1
This was really sweet!!! Great job!
Author's Response:
Thankyou! Fluff is so much fun to write.
10 [Report This]Date: September 18, 2006 07:31 am Title: Chapter 1
So, so sweet!
Author's Response: aw, thankyou!
9 [Report This]Date: September 18, 2006 06:27 am Title: Chapter 1
Oh, my gosh, this is so wonderful. So, the idea of The Kiss is planted right here in the rain. He totally is Prince Charming. I loved this. Yay, fluff!!
Author's Response:
Thanks, nqllisi! Glad you like it. I luv referencing 'The Kiss'. It's just such great inspiration.
10 [Report This]Date: September 18, 2006 03:36 am Title: Chapter 1
So cute! And I love how you segued perfectly into Casino Night!
Author's Response: Cool. I'm glad that came across. Thankyou!