10 [Report This]Date: January 01, 2009 09:00 pm Title: chapter six: the wedding part II and "what are you doing?"
Wow. Karen is going to be piiiiissssed. This hasn't been updated in a while, so...? I hope it ends up being finished, it's been a fun ride!
10 [Report This]Date: January 01, 2009 08:56 pm Title: chapter five: the wedding part I and epiphanies
WOWWWW. This has been pure awesomeness so far! And I totally know what's up with Will. ;) Can't wait to find out who person numero tres is, though! :D
10 [Report This]Date: January 01, 2009 08:50 pm Title: chapter four: escorted off the premises
Oh, no the wedding! And yet, I am continuing to read because this is awesomeness. :D
10 [Report This]Date: January 01, 2009 08:32 pm Title: chapter three: not a big deal
Wow, I bet Karen's bachelorette party is going to be AWK-WARD. Aaanywho, I am continuing to enjoy this very much. Stupid Toby. Reading on! :)
10 [Report This]Date: January 01, 2009 08:26 pm Title: chapter two: venting
Poor, poor Pam! I can totally imagine Karen being all "Haha I'm getting married to Jim and you're not!" I mean, I actually kind of liked her character but she was totally posessive. Ugh. Anyway, this is very well-written so far, I can't wait to see what happens next!
Favorite quote:
"It wasn’t Toby’s fault that Jim was marrying an awful woman with horrible tastes in wedding decorations. (Honestly, orange flowers? What the hell is that?)"
Orange flowers (though lovely outside of weddings) would be atrocious for a wedding. Unless it was like, Halloween themed. Which would be even worse than the flowers thing.
Date: January 01, 2009 08:17 pm Title: chapter one: the bomb is dropped
Wowww. That is pure suckishness. If that had actually happened on the show, I'm fairrrly certain I would be the one doing the impaling. ;)
Great story so far, reading on!
Favorite quote:
"Pam cleared her throat and fought down the urge to leap over her desk and strangle Karen. ’Probably shouldn’t have watched Mean Girls again last night.’"
I love that movie. :D
Date: July 19, 2008 10:21 am Title: chapter six: the wedding part II and "what are you doing?"
Fate must have led me to this story. I love it! I can't wait to see what happens next!!!
Date: July 17, 2008 06:41 pm Title: chapter six: the wedding part II and "what are you doing?"
Finally she told him! Awesome!!!
10 [Report This]Date: July 17, 2008 06:35 pm Title: chapter six: the wedding part II and "what are you doing?"
LOVED it. Especially the line "wedding objector, possible life ruin-er.". Seriously it made my day to see this updated. So, tell us, what exactly happens next at the reception?
Date: July 17, 2008 05:33 pm Title: chapter six: the wedding part II and "what are you doing?"
I sense a beat down coming.. Karen vs Jim's Mom..... I think Jim's mom can take AU Karen.
Date: July 17, 2008 04:47 pm Title: chapter six: the wedding part II and "what are you doing?"
Holy Hannah! That was a surprise--Jim's mom, eh? I can't even begin to imagine what you have in store for the reception, but I'm looking forward to finding out.
Date: July 17, 2008 03:45 pm Title: chapter six: the wedding part II and "what are you doing?"
Thank you! I was nervous for Jims reaction but it turned into everything I'd hoped for. Anxious to see what's next.
Date: July 17, 2008 03:43 pm Title: chapter six: the wedding part II and "what are you doing?"
Wow! So much just happened, but gosh my heart was racing that was amazing! I especially love Jim's mom objecting. Update soon! :)
Date: July 17, 2008 03:43 pm Title: chapter six: the wedding part II and "what are you doing?"
AAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
ME
Date: July 17, 2008 02:32 pm Title: chapter six: the wedding part II and "what are you doing?"
awh.... can't wait to see a hopefully plastered Karen!
Date: July 16, 2008 07:06 pm Title: chapter one: the bomb is dropped
Wow! Great chapter. Can't wait for Part 2! Who is the third person objecting? Update soon. Please!!
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I just submitted teh next chapter, so all your questions will eb answered soon. Thanks a ton for your review, GoJAM!
Date: July 16, 2008 12:27 pm Title: chapter five: the wedding part I and epiphanies
INCREDIBLE!!!! Talk about a cliffhanger! I won't sleep well until this is resolved! Please continue...
Author's Response: Oh boy, well I hope you'll get some rest after this next chapter! :D
Date: July 16, 2008 08:05 am Title: chapter five: the wedding part I and epiphanies
Nice job -- once again I am lovin' this new pissed off Pam. Again I like the "harshness" and honesty of the story. Especially hat even though it's filled w/ angst, you have not made Pam to be the victim. And the addition of the Karen's "best friend" is an interesting dynamic. I guess Karen has her own Pam. I think the best part for me was the paragraph that described Pam's revelation of how Jim felt when she was w/ Roy. Waiting to see who objected??? I have my guesses.
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm really trying to give all sides of the story so that no one will gang up on one character (except maybe Karen...), so it's so wonderful to hear that you recognize and appreciate that. Thanks for your review, Alamos!
Date: July 16, 2008 08:04 am Title: chapter five: the wedding part I and epiphanies
Just read your three last chapters. Tense! Three objections, eh? That certainly doesn't bode well. Interested to see what happens next.
Author's Response: Thanks so much, your review means a lot, NanReg! I hope you're not disappointed!
10 [Report This]Date: July 16, 2008 07:43 am Title: chapter five: the wedding part I and epiphanies
ohmigiddygod!
Ok, well I assume and voice is Pam's and another's is Will's but I have no idea who the third person is. PLEASE update quickly because I NEED to know!
Author's Response: Haha, the next chapter is coming! It's so awesome that you're so loyal, I know for sure all your answers will come with the next chapter.
10 [Report This]Date: July 16, 2008 07:30 am Title: chapter five: the wedding part I and epiphanies
Three voices??? I know who the two are but the third????
Author's Response: The next chapter will definetly answer all of your questions! Thanks for reviewing! (;
Date: July 16, 2008 07:15 am Title: chapter one: the bomb is dropped
Oh my! Three voices? I can hardly wait for the next chapter!!
Author's Response: Wow, thanks so much, kells8995! Yes, apparently Pam isn't the only one who's upset with this wedding, huh?!
Date: July 16, 2008 06:49 am Title: chapter five: the wedding part I and epiphanies
what a cliffhanger!! nice!!
7 [Report This]Date: July 16, 2008 06:47 am Title: chapter five: the wedding part I and epiphanies
Can't wait for more!
Date: July 16, 2008 06:35 am Title: chapter five: the wedding part I and epiphanies
The three voices... Pam and Will aaand... Jim would be nice wouldn't it? Yes Will should marry Karen, his long, lost love and Pam should have her big talk with Jim! Switching partners would be a nice idea! Or am I totally wrong... surprise me :P