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Reviewer: Wendy Blue Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: December 15, 2008 12:30 am Title: Hot Girl

This. was. so. good. I just read straight through and oh how I wish there was more. The tension was amazing!  And the Jim you write is arguably even more charming than he is on the show. Yowza. Great work!

Author's Response: wow - what a compliment, from one of the queens of AU around these parts!  thanks for reading, i'm pleased that you enjoyed it. it was fun to dig back into s1, even though it's sort of a minefield of oddities... and now i request, please go finish 'one day' :)

Reviewer: Hannah_Halpert Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: December 12, 2008 06:21 pm Title: Hot Girl

Awwwwwww yaaaaaaaaaay, so glad they got it on, but aw Pam lost her job. I really loved reading this, thanks Emily =)

Author's Response: you're welcome!

Reviewer: NanReg Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: December 12, 2008 08:12 am Title: Hot Girl

Ooooo-WEEEE!  Was not expecting that!  Love the sexy tension.  Niiiice. 

Author's Response: i am all about the sexy tension... :)

Reviewer: Cheeb Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: December 11, 2008 06:39 pm Title: Hot Girl

I so enjoyed this. Sorry to see it end, but you picked a good episode to end your story with. Great line:

“I was saying that it was time for the crew to hear how I’m not enjoying Michael’s latest tragic fixation.”

I've favorited a few of your stories, but this one I think is my favorite of them. Thanks for posting it!

Author's Response: thank you - a favourite among favourites!  wow, thanks so much.  i had a great time writing and editing this; it was my pleasure to share.

Reviewer: cosbysweater Signed [Report This]
Date: December 11, 2008 06:09 pm Title: Pilot

asdjk! I love it. Perfect and sweet and just...I'm usually not a fan of AUs but this was great.

Author's Response: something about AUs in this fandom, though, are so great.  people get crazy creative and i love it.  glad you enjoyed!

Reviewer: Cheeb Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: December 08, 2008 12:04 am Title: Basketball

Who can resist sweaty basketball playing Jim Halpert? Not me. Loved that she punished herself by walking away from the warehouse because of her reaction to him. This chapter may have been short, but your point was made perfectly. I can't wait for your version of the Hot Girl episode. Jealous Pam. Should be good.

Author's Response: who can resist?  no one. thanks for sticking around for the series!

Reviewer: NanReg Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: December 07, 2008 05:44 pm Title: Basketball

Yet another great take on an old standard, Emily.  You're on fire today :)

Author's Response: aw shucks.  thank you!

Reviewer: Hannah_Halpert Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: December 07, 2008 05:16 pm Title: Basketball

Ahhhhhhhhhhhh that was too short lol, I must know what happens -) I love this series so much :)

Author's Response: thank you - for this review and for the rest!  i promise, the end is near.  ooh, and not in an apocalyptic way :)

Reviewer: Noodles Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: December 07, 2008 03:07 pm Title: Basketball

I'm really enjoying this fic. I like how you've integrated the scenes from the actual episodes into these chapters. Great stuff

Author's Response: thank you so much!  it's so funny, i wrote this a long while ago - and it's so great to see people enjoying this quirky idea i had :)  thanks for the feedback!!

Reviewer: Bayjb Signed [Report This]
Date: December 07, 2008 11:48 am Title: Basketball

Oh boy. I can't wait to see what happens. I have this feeling all this chemistry is going to explode soon.

Author's Response: one thing i love about the office-dom is something ed helms says in the commentary for beach day: "countdown to jim and pam explosion!"  so.  yeah.  what ed said :)

Reviewer: Crystalized Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: November 30, 2008 10:36 pm Title: The Alliance

I like this story - very clever. But how long can she realistically resist the Halpert charm? Give in, Pam! That can be the 'angle' for the Stanford branch.

Author's Response: well, i don't know how "real" pam (er, the pam in the documentary we know, not the 'pam' in this fic - yikes, confusing) spent so many years not jumping jim -- but you know, people are cut from a different cloth, etc ;)  anyway, you'll know soon enough where we're going... thanks for the feedback!

Reviewer: Bayjb Signed [Report This]
Date: November 30, 2008 04:31 pm Title: The Alliance

I really like this fic. It's different and I like the idea of them sneaking around and stuff happening off-camera. I can't wait to see more.

Reviewer: khand3stooges Signed [Report This]
Date: November 30, 2008 03:34 pm Title: Pilot

I really like this concept.  I feel bad for Pam but Jim sure seems determined!

Reviewer: LuxTenebrae Signed 5 [Report This]
Date: November 30, 2008 03:11 pm Title: The Alliance

I'm really enjoying this! It's a very interesting position you've put them in. Keep going!

Reviewer: Hannah_Halpert Signed [Report This]
Date: November 30, 2008 02:21 pm Title: The Alliance

OOOOOhhhhh what next. I feel so sorry for Pam cos she wants him, but feels like she cant have him. I can't wait to read the next chapter.

Reviewer: Hannah_Halpert Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: November 30, 2008 02:10 pm Title: Health Care

I think this is amazing. I love how different this story is, but I still want more than ever for them to get together. I can't wait to read more.

Reviewer: Noodles Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: November 30, 2008 02:07 pm Title: The Alliance

Great chapter. I was so happy to see this updated. Such a realistic portrayal of how Pam would act in such a situation. Looking forward to more

Reviewer: Hannah_Halpert Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: November 30, 2008 02:06 pm Title: Diversity Day

Awwwwwww I love reading Jim flirting fics =) I really like how you write them!

Reviewer: Hannah_Halpert Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: November 30, 2008 01:58 pm Title: Pilot

Ooooh I like where you're taking this, sounds very interesting.

Reviewer: Cheeb Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: November 30, 2008 11:37 am Title: The Alliance

I'm really enjoying this and am always checking for updates. I am a fan of AU stories, so this was not hard to like. I've been very bad in reviewing; just know that this is one of my favorites from you. Really looking forward to the rest.

Author's Response: thanks so much for your feedback!  i'm happy to supply you with your AU fix.  be on the lookout for more soon!

Reviewer: NanReg Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: November 30, 2008 10:37 am Title: The Alliance

Just re-read this from the start.  I really love the premise you've come up with.  You've managed to keep everyone in character while shaking things up a bit. Awesome update. 

Author's Response: aw man i was just thinking about you today!  i still owe you a story... oy.  anyway. thanks so much, NanReg! i love this fandom's AU series, they're always so interesting.  glad to see this works for you.

Reviewer: aimzers84 Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: November 30, 2008 09:20 am Title: The Alliance

I really like this! Cant wait for more!

Author's Response: thanks!

Reviewer: cosbysweater Signed [Report This]
Date: November 30, 2008 08:41 am Title: Pilot

oh boy i'm so excited to see this updated! so good. SO GOOD. I wish I could elaborate, but oh man I just love it. And I can't wait to read more!

Author's Response: i had no idea i had so many admirers! rest assured, the next parts are coming soon... thanks for the feedback!

Reviewer: elly Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: November 30, 2008 08:28 am Title: The Alliance

This story does not have enough reviews. Seriously, you've given something we've all watched countless times a fresh spin and that's rare. I just hope we don't have to wait 3 seasons for these two kids to get together!Can't wait for the next update. :)


Author's Response: thank you so much for your feedback!  i'll be posting the new chapters soon, once i take a good crack at them.  but it's all done!  

Reviewer: Kestrel Signed [Report This]
Date: October 27, 2008 04:50 pm Title: Health Care

How have I not found this story before? Such a cool AU. Please continue!!

Author's Response: oh thank you!  yeah, i definitely will be continuing it; i hope soon.

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