8 [Report This]Date: September 14, 2008 09:33 am Title: Pilot
Hey I really like this idea. Very clever. I like the way you use a lot of the same lines from the show but in different scenarios. Ooh I wonder if Jim starts dating Katy to make Pam jealous. I hope you update soon!
Author's Response: thank you so much! i hope i update soon too :) it's written, it just needs to be transcribed onto the interweb... keep an eye out!
Date: August 10, 2008 12:06 pm Title: Pilot
I love this idea! Especially 'cause they're are going to be a lot more chapters, if you intend to write one for every episode.;) I really love it.=)
Author's Response: i do intend to write one for every chapter. actually, i was just drafting the chapter for "hot girl" on the train the other day. it's my hope to get the next chapters up soon. thanks for your feedback!
Date: July 20, 2008 09:31 pm Title: Health Care
I really like this idea. I can be pretty skeptical about AU fic, especially for this fandom, but this is written so... is classily a word? I think so.
Anyhoo, just wanted to say keep up the good work and I'll be looking forward to reading more :D
Author's Response: hey - if i get your stamp of approval, you can make up as many words as you want :)
9 [Report This]Date: July 20, 2008 05:27 pm Title: Health Care
Don't know how you came up with this idea, but I'm loving it.
Author's Response: i don't know either! kind of quirky, huh? i just love AU fics, i don't know what it is. and i like to tweak reality (well, "reality") just a bit.
9 [Report This]Date: July 19, 2008 07:25 pm Title: Health Care
I am THOROUGHLY enjoying this! Great premise! They still have a very real obstacle between them. You've captured the chemistry between them really well.
Continue! Please!
Author's Response: i love it - caps, bold, italics! thank you for the feedback. yes, there's certainly a roadblock, which i think is what connects it to the show for me and doesn't leave it totally out there in AU-land. that's a really lovely compliment re: chemistry. so glad you think so. there will be more! hey - feel free to reach out with ideas from the rest of season one. nothing is set in stone yet.
Date: July 19, 2008 06:47 pm Title: Health Care
This is cute and clever! I like how you're weaving in elements from the show but it doesn't feel too overdone. Although I hope this version of the documentary doesn't go on indefinitely because it would be really sad if they couldn't be together for that reason!
Author's Response: you know, i was going for cute and clever - so i thank you. i decided to have this be a succinct series, so there will be a chapter for every episode of season one, not one more or less. keep your eye out for new chapters!
Date: July 19, 2008 02:50 pm Title: Pilot
I'm interested in this and I love this idea. Please don't make me wait too long for the other chapters!
Author's Response: oh gosh i hope not! i've outlined all of the chapters and have started the one for "the alliance," so i hope to have the next ch. up soon. but let me know if you have any ideas! i'm open to feedback!
Date: July 19, 2008 02:49 pm Title: Pilot
I'm really liking this. I like the combo of AU and the real deal. Nice idea!
Author's Response: thanks so much! isn't it funny that reality qualifies as AU? :)
Date: July 19, 2008 02:43 pm Title: Health Care
This is a unique idea and I'm liking it. In a weird way it also seems like Pam is the strong one and Jim is the fragile one in this situation, I can see tension is coming and I'm excited to see where you go with this.
Author's Response: thanks! it's been fun to dissect season one to see where there is room for alterations as a new way to examine their dynamic. i think moving pam out of that relationship with roy launched the pam we know into being a totally different person - and when she meets jim, she only resembles who we know in the slightest of ways. yes - there is more tension on its way :) thanks for the review!