Date: August 19, 2007 08:10 am Title: Chapter 2 - Jim
Wow. This was really good. I love how you presented both Jim & Pam's perspective. Great job.
Date: January 12, 2007 07:17 pm Title: Chapter 2 - Jim
I really enjoyed the insight into Jim's thoughts between the Confession and the Kiss; it makes complete sense. Nice work!
Author's Response: thanks for the comment. Yeah - my whole idea with this series is to try and get at what the characters were really thinking or feeling in the moments that we can't see on the show.
Date: December 26, 2006 08:54 am Title: Chapter 1 - Pam
i really liked this. good job, honey!
Author's Response: thanks t. part 2 is in the works.
8 [Report This]Date: September 19, 2006 04:15 pm Title: Chapter 1 - Pam
Very nice--I like this, because even though Roy is the one leaving, it's because of something Pam did. (I feel like Roy leaving Pam is usually an unsatisfactory ending for Jim.)
Author's Response: Thanks for the feedback. I always felt like Pam didn't have enough backbone to make too many difficult decisions. And at this point, I don't think Roy has left entirely...but I'm still writing other parts and trying to figure out what happens.
8 [Report This]Date: September 19, 2006 02:34 pm Title: Chapter 1 - Pam
This really captures the dilemma Pam finds herself in- she's trapped by her own past. Great job.
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm anxious for the season premier to see what she actually does in the situation.
8 [Report This]Date: September 19, 2006 11:34 am Title: Chapter 1 - Pam
I meant to say what it said exactly, but I just realized what was said in the letter was explained. I'm such a dolt. Ignore me :P
Author's Response: Well...I'm still trying to figure out how she ends the letter too, so you're not such a dolt. ;) But thanks for the review.
8 [Report This]Date: September 19, 2006 11:29 am Title: Chapter 1 - Pam
This was great. Wish I knew what the letter said, though. Good job!
10 [Report This]Date: September 19, 2006 11:22 am Title: Chapter 1 - Pam
She really needs to let go and feel doesn't she?
Author's Response: Yeah...I think that's her main problem - I always thought that Pam felt freest around Jim. And then Roy is very set in his ways, and yet she has such loyalty to him at the same time.
10 [Report This]Date: September 19, 2006 10:01 am Title: Chapter 1 - Pam
Awww....poor Pam. Really wonderful work.
Author's Response: Thanks - I always felt awful for her at the end of Casino Night, and that's where this story came from.