Date: August 15, 2008 12:37 pm Title: Chapter 5
Eeek, oh, Pam. That was painful. Of course, House's commentary was spot-on. You have a gift for replicating his speech pattern- I hear it so clearly in my mind's ear! LOVE this!
10 [Report This]Date: August 15, 2008 11:39 am Title: Chapter 5
Oh yeah. I would have loved to see Angry!JimandPam confrontation in the break room. I can't wait for more :)
10 [Report This]Date: August 15, 2008 11:31 am Title: Chapter 4
No bonus points for me :( But yay..another chapter! Off to read....
loving this!
10 [Report This]Date: August 15, 2008 11:28 am Title: Chapter 5
Moxie, this is awesome! You write House amazingly well-- I get a perfect mental picture of their entire interaction. Poor Pam... let's hope the next attempt at a 'cure' will go better!
Date: August 15, 2008 11:28 am Title: Chapter 2
Oh this is good, Mox. I don't really watch House often, but I've seen it enough to know that you've nailed his voice - I swear I can hear it in my head. This is so much fun. I love it. Reading on now....
Date: August 15, 2008 11:11 am Title: Chapter 5
Another interesting and witty chapter. I like the stregnth that House is giving Pam in her quest to get Jim. House does the exact same thing w/ his student. I cannot wait to see what "trouble" Pam causes.
Date: August 15, 2008 11:06 am Title: Chapter 4
I love fanifcs that make me laugh out loud – this was especially funny -- What's that going to do, Beesly? Get you back on his Christmas card list? It’s amazing how spot on you writing House’s. And RELIVING the entire day… sounds brilliant.
10 [Report This]Date: August 15, 2008 11:00 am Title: Chapter 5
“That's the spirit,” he replied with clearly fake enthusiasm. “Now get back out there and cause some more trouble.” Moxie, this just keeps getting better.
Date: August 15, 2008 10:59 am Title: Chapter 3
Love the analogues, I can hear Hugh Laurie’s voice in my head. The dialogue between Pam and House is so witty and sarcastic. House’s words to Pam are laced with such rare truth and honesty. This is a very clever story.
Date: August 15, 2008 08:29 am Title: Chapter 4
Keep it coming Mox I definately don't mind! As far as the "oh Boy" my guess is I keep thinking Adam Sandler or Robin Williams?
B
Date: August 15, 2008 08:21 am Title: Chapter 4
“I guess – but that's about as possible as --”
“As a television character lecturing you in your living room?” Ha!
Moxie, this is so clever. I can't wait for the do-over!
Date: August 15, 2008 05:37 am Title: Chapter 4
Woot~! Quantum Leap FTW baby!!!
I don't know why, but it makes perfect sense for House to have these magical powers. I half expected him to fast forward the tape so Pam could plan her next time talking to Jim.
Date: August 15, 2008 05:34 am Title: Chapter 4
First off, I claim my Quantum Leap bonus points, thank you very much.
Next: I'm loving this. All of it. You have Pam down pat, and House is so very, very House. I love the very "Ghost of Christmas Past" thing you've got going on. However, in four chapters, I think my very favorite line is this: He leaned heavily on his cane, his head bowed for a few moments. That is such a vivid detail, it's exactly what he does. Exactly! Well-observed. Love love love this so far!
Date: August 14, 2008 08:32 pm Title: Chapter 1
LOVE it! I'm only a casual watcher of House (have seen maybe a total of ten episodes?), but I've seen it enough to know that you've got his sarcastic, borderline-asshole voice down pat.
He leaned forward even further, his face serious. “Karen lies,” House declared.
Hee. I got far too much enjoyment out of those two lines. Can't wait to see where this goes!
10 [Report This]Date: August 14, 2008 07:34 pm Title: Chapter 3
Love this! I don't watch House, but know the character well enough. So I'm not sure how well you're writing him, but your Pam is spot-on! I love her response to the battery operated question. Very cute, and I'm looking forward to more :)
Date: August 14, 2008 07:02 pm Title: Chapter 3
Yay! a Moxie story...they always make me smile. Keep it comin', I don't watch House regularly, but I have so I really like this. He is a great TV Doc.
Date: August 14, 2008 06:48 pm Title: Chapter 2
I love this! I want House to be my subconscious!
Date: August 14, 2008 06:23 pm Title: Chapter 3
Now, if House could actually say 'bullshit' on Fox, we'd have something. Seriously, this totally sounds like him. (Which means of course, that you probably need therapy....)
Date: August 14, 2008 06:19 pm Title: Chapter 3
Go, Moxie! Go, Moxie!
Date: August 14, 2008 05:58 pm Title: Chapter 1
I don't watch House, but it's funny to hear somebody saying all the things I was shouting at the TV when these episodes were airing!
I'm looking forward to more chapters!
Date: August 14, 2008 05:43 pm Title: Chapter 2
Oh, Mox, you write House perfectly, too. (That jackass!)
And the lack of sense of humor was almost fatal. That damned Karen sucked all the funny out of the room.
Date: August 14, 2008 05:24 pm Title: Chapter 2
I don't watch House at all - but I get the gist of this anyway. Love having someone lay it all on the table for Pam. Poor Pam. :(
If only this had really happened. Oh S3 - you still piss me off even now. :)
Date: August 14, 2008 12:38 pm Title: Chapter 2
Wow Mox you really captured Gregory House! If he can't wake Pam up no one can. I loved "Karen Lies, everybody Lies"! That was great! I'm glad you are writing more frequently and look forward to more from you! Especially Chapter4 of Squirrell II. ( I couldn't resist reminding you. LOL
B
Date: August 14, 2008 12:24 pm Title: Chapter 2
Wow. I'm not usually a fan of crossover stories, but this was really fun to read. House is the perfect guy to point out the ridiculousness of the situation between Jim and Pam. I would diagnose them both with a broken heart at this point. I'm now very interested to see where this goes. Continue.
9 [Report This]Date: August 14, 2008 12:06 pm Title: Chapter 1
This is amazing! House + Office = Greatness. I cannot wait for more. :D