Date: January 17, 2010 06:31 pm Title: First Kisses
Oh my goodness, that was beautiful! Sometimes the dialog can be unbelievably unrealistic, but this was just perfect. Fantastic job! I think this is my favorite proposal story, not just choosing a different night or continuing to propose at the office, but going somewhere else, somewhere equally important to their relationship. I just can't say enough how Jim's words were so beautiful. I want somebody to say that to me!
Alright, with this happy image in my mind, I will keep doing my homework. Sadly. But happily with this image in my brain. Great job yet again!
Date: August 25, 2008 10:46 am Title: First Kisses
Very romantic!
Date: August 25, 2008 08:53 am Title: First Kisses
There's always room for more engagement fic when it's a lovely as that! The imagery was just dripping with emotion. From the streetlight/spotlight to Pam crying out the past, it was engrossing and engaging and a much better ending than we were given.
Date: August 21, 2008 06:35 pm Title: First Kisses
This proposal was much better than one in the parking lot would have been. So sweet and romantic. I just love JAM love.
Date: August 21, 2008 03:26 pm Title: First Kisses
very well written.
poetic, even.
Date: August 21, 2008 02:20 pm Title: First Kisses
We can never have enough 'right the wrong' proposal stories. Gah! I want to see what happened! Come ON 9/25 already!
(Nice job, BTW).
Date: August 21, 2008 11:14 am Title: First Kisses
This was beautiful. I'm choosing to believe that this really happened after Toby's party. (At least until season 5 starts.) :) Truy enjoyed this.
Date: August 21, 2008 08:15 am Title: First Kisses
That was perfect. It just may have been the highlight of my day. :)
Date: August 21, 2008 08:07 am Title: First Kisses
I so enjoyed this. It gave me chills. Such a sweet, heartfelt proposal. Great job.
Date: August 21, 2008 06:37 am Title: First Kisses
Aww, beautiful and sweet!
Date: August 21, 2008 04:11 am Title: First Kisses
Thanks for this...I really needed it. There are just so many gloom and doom stories posting right now and this was a breath of fresh air!
Date: August 21, 2008 03:16 am Title: First Kisses
To quote a beloved tv-character "You really brought out the big guns". That was awesome. You're writing is beautifully poetic and I loved the plot. I can imagine Jim doing something like that.