Date: February 19, 2009 07:05 pm Title: Chapter 1
God, this is so cute. =) I loved it!
8 [Report This]Date: September 20, 2008 11:13 pm Title: Chapter 1
I loved the scene in CM that inspired you to write this - and I loved this story. It reminded me a lot of my real life - well, at least the stubble, shoes and snoring. Not the Jim Halpert part. Because if I had that part, I wouldn't be reading this at 2:10 am... Great job!
Date: August 25, 2008 09:43 pm Title: Chapter 1
Loooooove this! I especially liked the first part, where Pam is getting annoyed at all the little things about Jim. It was just so realistic, especially in contrast to pure fluff, because no matter how much you love a person, on certain days, EVERYTHING they do will annoy the s**t out of you. But of course, with true love, you realize you actually find all those little annoying things endearing. Pam comes to this conclusion beautifully. Great job!
5 [Report This]Date: August 25, 2008 07:19 am Title: Chapter 1
I really enjoyed this story :) I love how you've addressed the annoyances that comes with living with your significant other and how it is almost never perfect but that since they love each other so much it makes it worth it. Lovely!
10 [Report This]Date: August 24, 2008 09:07 pm Title: Chapter 1
So I thought since your such a loyal reviewer of my fic, I should probably read yours. :)
I loved this sooo much!! Such warm fuzzies everywhere. I especially loved:
There is a small smile among the new crop of stubble, which will no doubt find its way to her sink sometime this weekend. He’ll go play ball in the morning and after coming home and draining the cold water jug in the fridge, he’ll leave his shoes in her way again before hopping in the shower where he’ll use up most of the hot water.
That's a really great example of all the fluid connections you make throughout this little oneshot. Nicely done!
Author's Response: Thank you DAS, I'm glad you liked it and glad you reviewed. Reviews make me smile, and I am a dork, Hee! I had fun with this little thing and it got quiet the response. I like that part too, it's just all the more reason for Pam to love him, because she knows so much about him and his bad habits too, and that he won't change and she still just loves him to bits.
Date: August 24, 2008 08:38 am Title: Chapter 1
Loved your story. I really liked that scene in CM and you did a wonderful job expounding on that.
Author's Response: Thanks Skeet! I love that ep, and it was so cute the way he rattled off those things Pam does, love her expression and his during that little exchange. They were totally made for each other! Viva la JAM!
Date: August 24, 2008 01:57 am Title: Chapter 1
this earns a big giant "awwww" from me. I am loving the surge of fluff around here, too much sadness...I need more this.
wonderful wonderful job
Author's Response: What can I say? I love the fluff too PPC. The gloom is starting to become a downer, but I do enjoy a pile o' angst now and again. Does that make me twisted? Thanks so much for reading.
Date: August 23, 2008 11:44 pm Title: Chapter 1
That was amazing. So realistic and so truthful. You somehow manage to create this picture that's both unromantic and yet completely romantic at the same time. Just like life. So, bravo.
Author's Response: Thank you so much Blanca! I am really glad people have enjoyed this. It is true, that anyone can get under your skin, but then you remember that they are also the most amazing person in your life and you just don't care about the other stuff as much. Jim and Pam knowing each other so well no doubt have all kinds of things that bug them about the other but really, when your boyfriend is Jim Halpert how can you stay mad?
Date: August 23, 2008 10:19 pm Title: Chapter 1
That was so unbelievably adorable. Great job!
Author's Response: Thank you Leia, I'm glad you enjoyed it.
8 [Report This]Date: August 23, 2008 07:46 pm Title: Chapter 1
That was SO adorable, I can imagine them both getting on each other's nerves, but wanting it no other way :)
Author's Response: Thanks Hannah, they definitely pick up on each others bad traits, that convo in CM proves that yest they pay attention to that stuff, but it's all okay, as long as they are together. I am positive Jim wouldn't want any other girl spilling things in his apartment, and same goes for Pam. In LA when she was animating and he came over to show her second life, she got totally annoyed and actually scowled for a moment, but only a moment. That's gonna happen. I love JAM!
Date: August 23, 2008 07:40 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oh, I love this! Boys can be so messy and such a pain, but then you wouldn't want to live without them either. Very cute!
Author's Response: It's so true, I could not live without my hubby, no matter how sloppy he can be and he totally leaves the bread open all the time.
8 [Report This]Date: August 23, 2008 03:24 pm Title: Chapter 1
*sigh* so sweet. Love this: She knows that for the rest of her life it will be his stubble in the sink, his big shoes in her way and his snoring keeping her awake. Sounds pretty special to me : )
Author's Response: Thanks Nan, it is pretty special, I have major love for JAM and I know they are ordinary peeps like the rest of us, that's why we like them. I thought this would be cute, it's fluffy but not phony fluff, no matter what, the right guys is worth it, and the flaws are like the best part. Keeps it interesting.
Date: August 23, 2008 02:04 pm Title: Chapter 1
Aw...I loved this! Now I want to get married and be kept up at night by my snoring husband. Okay, maybe that's weird. Jim and Pam make me say a lot of weird things...
Author's Response: Jim and Pam make me say weird things too. Totally not weird though, I love my snoring husband, he just needs a little push sometimes.
10 [Report This]Date: August 23, 2008 01:55 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oh I can't tell you how happy this made me while reading it. I was smiling from beginning to end.
Author's Response: Glad you liked it, thanks for your review! I can relate to Pam here. :0)
Date: August 23, 2008 01:44 pm Title: Chapter 1
Ahhh...she is one lucky woman!
Author's Response: Yes she is, a sloppy man that you realy love is a joy and a bit of a pain ;)
Author's Response: Yes she is, a sloppy man that you realy love is a joy and a bit of a pain ;)