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Reviewer: kaystar Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: September 22, 2008 08:25 pm Title: the short stop

This was cute. I like that kids under 12 get 5 strikes - along with the other cute rules like "creeking". And Pam checking out Jim's muscles, yum!

Reviewer: Hannah_Halpert Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: September 06, 2008 03:53 pm Title: the short stop

Awww go Pam, check out the hot stuff =)

Reviewer: drewbers Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: September 04, 2008 09:47 am Title: the short stop

Yes! Pam playing baseball...HOT. Love meeting more of the Halpert clan. I love the idea of Jim having a big, close family.

Reviewer: Orfice Flan Signed [Report This]
Date: September 02, 2008 12:14 pm Title: the short stop

"Pam's at bat in the next chapter! I will try to have it up soon."  TWSS.  This is a great idea.  LOVEY LOVE that Pam got Jim out and he calls her sexy short stop.  What I wouldn't give to watch Jim play baseball or any sport for matter...oh yeah, off to watch "Basketball"!  You just stay right there and keep writing. 

 It's really fun to read.



Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I'm so glad you are reading and enjoying the story. rnrnI thought the ladies might droll over baseball Jim ;) Glad to see it's working! Meanwhile, I'll keep writing and drooling over baseball Pam :)

Reviewer: albie_ Signed [Report This]
Date: September 02, 2008 11:02 am Title: the short stop

Hee, good fun!


Author's Response: Thanks! I am having fun writing this and I'm very glad you are having fun reading it.

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