10 [Report This]Date: September 30, 2006 11:20 am Title: Chapter 4
Wow, that was so beautifully and sweetly erotic .
10 [Report This]Date: September 30, 2006 10:54 am Title: Chapter 4
Holy cow! That was hot. I love that Pam has a lot of difficulty expressing what she wants from Jim or what she wants to tell him; that feels very true to her character.
10 [Report This]Date: September 30, 2006 10:36 am Title: Chapter 4
I sure do love it when you let these two get carried away!
10 [Report This]Date: September 30, 2006 10:35 am Title: Chapter 4
Aw! That was so hot, and so sweet and perfect. It's been a while since I got my loving Jam smut fix, and oh how glorious this was. Let's hope they get carried away more!
Date: September 30, 2006 10:33 am Title: Chapter 1
See, I knew they were mere mortals. After all, what red blooded woman could be in that position with Jim and resist? How hot was it when he asked if he could touch her? Yowza.
10 [Report This]Date: September 30, 2006 10:21 am Title: Chapter 4
Please let them get carried away some more!!!!
8 [Report This]Date: September 30, 2006 10:14 am Title: Chapter 4
Perfectly hot. And I love the last line.
10 [Report This]Date: September 30, 2006 10:11 am Title: Chapter 3
Aww, so sweet. I love the idea of sleeping with (just sleeping!) someone you're in love with. It's always seemed so romantic to me.
8 [Report This]Date: September 30, 2006 09:57 am Title: Chapter 4
After all this time, of course they can't control themselves. Seems about right to me.
10 [Report This]Date: September 30, 2006 09:42 am Title: Chapter 3
I love the way you have them talk to each other- it has exactly the right tone.
10 [Report This]Date: September 29, 2006 08:53 pm Title: Chapter 3
SO CUTE! :)!
10 [Report This]Date: September 29, 2006 07:55 pm Title: Chapter 3
Willow dear, do you know how excited I get when I click on one of your stories and get the "Mature" warning? Because it's a lot excited, that's how much. :)
Date: September 29, 2006 06:32 pm Title: Chapter 1
I love the tone you're sustaining here. It just sounds like them, even if it is a "them" we haven't gotten a chance to see yet.
9 [Report This]Date: September 29, 2006 04:51 pm Title: Chapter 3
Their phone conversation and nervousness is just spot-on. Nice!
Another chapter, perhaps? ;)
10 [Report This]Date: September 29, 2006 04:33 pm Title: Chapter 3
Is it wrong that I'm excited about the next chapter because I know this story is rated "M" and I love the way you write them together? I'm pretty sure it is.
In the meantime-loved this chapter. It was adorable and so very them. The conversation at the beginning was great, as was the initial uncertainty till they got comfortable around each other again.
And, as I've already said, can't wait for the next chapter :)
10 [Report This]Date: September 29, 2006 04:26 pm Title: Chapter 3
The chemistry between them in that chapter jumped off the page. That was so good. I really don't know how they can share a bed in a chaste manner. ;)
10 [Report This]Date: September 29, 2006 04:26 pm Title: Chapter 3
That was so cute. I'm drawing a line down the middle of the bed and if you cross it, you are on the couch."
That would not stop me from crossing the line.
10 [Report This]Date: September 29, 2006 03:27 pm Title: Chapter 3
Great phone/drive scene - reads like a real conversation between them. All I can say is they must both have super human restraint. Curious to see how long that lasts!
10 [Report This]Date: September 26, 2006 02:56 pm Title: Chapter 2
This was so sweet!!!! Really enjoying it.
Date: September 26, 2006 09:45 am Title: Chapter 2
Nice :) I like fics that fill in the moments we "missed". Looking forward to your updates!
10 [Report This]Date: September 25, 2006 11:09 pm Title: Chapter 2
Aww! I really loved this! This part had me rolling: "I love the picture, but when I showed it to Dwigt he said 'real men don't wish'." So awesome!
9 [Report This]Date: September 25, 2006 05:27 am Title: Chapter 2
Aww, how sweet. I love that Pam admits she can only be brave via e-mail.
8 [Report This]Date: September 24, 2006 06:34 pm Title: Chapter 2
That picture is so Jim. All the characterizations are just perfect, and I love this theory!
6 [Report This]Date: September 24, 2006 05:19 pm Title: Chapter 2
awwww so cute! i love your explanation of pam's thinking here--she didn't break up with roy because of jim, but now that she's single, she can't stop thinking about him.
perfect :)
10 [Report This]Date: September 24, 2006 05:15 pm Title: Chapter 2
"Real men don't wish" - yeah, totally Dwight thing to say.