1 [Report This]Date: September 02, 2020 08:38 pm Title: There are things about me you don't know.
This was the most beautiful piece of writing I've ever read. I literally have no words but; WOW. Thank you SO MUCH!
10 [Report This]Date: January 31, 2010 10:21 am Title: There are things about me you don't know.
This story makes my throat tighten and my heart sigh. It's absolutely beautiful, the love that Jim and Pam have for one another. The way you wrote them was just poignant, romantic, heartfelt without being sappy.
I can't pick out one part that I love most because it's all just so perfect. The way they care, the little things that they do, the way they feel about each other.
Thank you so, so much for writing this wonderful story.
Date: January 05, 2009 11:51 am Title: There are things about me you don't know.
You are fabulous. Seriously, I'm in love with your writing.
Author's Response: Well thank you so much! That is really really kind of you to say. :)
10 [Report This]Date: September 20, 2008 11:32 pm Title: There are things about me you don't know.
Holy fucking crap.
Words cannot describe how much I loved that story.
Towards the middle, my throat actually caught a little and I let out this demented little squeal like a dying mouse, because I was actually that emotional.
It sucks so much that Jim and Pam are fictional.
Author's Response: LOL...wow! Thank you so much! I'm really pleased you enjoyed it, especially that much. A dying mouse squeal never seemed appealing until now. :)
8 [Report This]Date: September 20, 2008 09:29 pm Title: There are things about me you don't know.
This was so beautifully romantic. Great job!
Author's Response: Ah, well thank you! I never knew I had it in me. :)
Date: September 18, 2008 02:49 pm Title: There are things about me you don't know.
Fluff. Extreme, beautiful fluff! It was so lovely and symmetrical and sweet. Thanks for putting me in a really good mood. I'll sleep with a smile. :P
Author's Response: Well thanks for such a kind review - I really appreciate it!
Date: September 18, 2008 02:47 pm Title: There are things about me you don't know.
Suh-weet. A lovely bit of fluff! Thanks for sharing it!
Author's Response: Thanks so much!
Date: September 18, 2008 11:38 am Title: There are things about me you don't know.
With all of the stress I'm getting from speculating what's going to happen next week(!) with Season 5, this story was absolutely perfect to remind me that everything's going to be fine. You captured Jim and Pam perfectly, and I loved the bits about the nightmares from both Jim and Pam's POV. Great story!
Author's Response: Thanks so much! Don't fret; I think all will be well with America's favorite couple (of loveable dorks :) ).
10 [Report This]Date: September 18, 2008 08:12 am Title: There are things about me you don't know.
This is really beautiful writing. I love the way they mirror each other, but still have their distinct voices. You've done another wonderful service to this fic archive.
Author's Response: Wow, thank you so much. It's always tough for me to make sure that I keep Jim and Pam's voices similar, but distinct. I'm so glad you enjoyed this. :)
Date: September 18, 2008 07:42 am Title: There are things about me you don't know.
Crap, in my overly gushy review I forgot the one other thing I meant to mention. This is so good, I really think the summary you put up doesn't do it justice. I don't know what summary you could use, I just think something different would draw people in more, because everyone needs to read this story :)
Author's Response: I took your advice. Thank you. ;)
10 [Report This]Date: September 18, 2008 07:40 am Title: There are things about me you don't know.
Wow. I really don't know what to say Little Comment. This is breathtaking beautiful. I would quote but I literally couldn't pick anything specific because every single line of this hits home so perfectly, I even had tears in my eyes by the end.
Seriously, this is without a doubt the best oneshot I have ever read on MTT. I know you said you don't normally do fluff, and to be honest I don't normally read pure fluff but this is something else. This is like the essence of why Jim/Pam is so wonderful.
A brilliant read :)
Author's Response: Thank you so very much, Shooting Stars...this is without a doubt the best review I've ever received on MTT! :) I hope it doesn't sound arrogant, but this gets me misty too...it's very personal in some respects, but I think it also does justice to the Jim/Pam dynamic. rnrnI can't tell you how much this made me smile...thanks again!!
10 [Report This]Date: September 18, 2008 05:50 am Title: There are things about me you don't know.
Don't that this the wrong way but you should write in a trance more often.
Maybe I'm all sentimental from watching the early season DVD's and the promos for Season 5 but this got me all weepy. This was really beautiful. For a minute I almost thought it was their wedding vows.
"The rest of my life won’t be long enough to share with you, and maybe there will always be things you don’t know, but if you never know any of these secrets, know this: that everything I am, everything I was and everything I will be, is because of you, and belongs – now and forever - to you."
I so love that part. Thanks for posting it...truly a wonderful read.
Author's Response: Well thank you for reading and reviewing! I won't take that trance thing at all personally...I absolutely agree that that trance is a gift from above the few times I've written the sappy, romantic parts in my stories. :)
9 [Report This]Date: September 18, 2008 05:45 am Title: There are things about me you don't know.
Little Comment, I'm glad you're feeling inspired to churn out these gems. This was so heartfelt and romantic with just the right touch of humor to keep it from being overly sappy. Any mention of Love Actually makes me smile. Thanks for another lovely story.
Author's Response: Thanks so much as always, Nan...you're such a great cheerleader! This is what I call humangstuff. (Say THAT three times fast!) A little of all the essential elements does a great relationship make. :)
Date: September 17, 2008 06:53 pm Title: There are things about me you don't know.
Beautiful job, LC. Love how even the things they "don't know" about each other, fall into sync so perfectly. Thanks for sharing the fluff!
Author's Response: Thanks so much, EH! I think the theme of the things Jim and Pam assume each other doesn't know being the things that they know better than anything is a running theme in their history (I hope to God that made sense!). I'm glad you enjoyed it!
Date: September 17, 2008 06:12 pm Title: There are things about me you don't know.
Wow. Well, since pam never found that conversion chart, take whichever one's best: a thumbs up, a gold star, or 10 points. And add a pat on the back. Because, that was awesome.
Author's Response: Well thanks, Llana! I will selfishly take all those things, but at least have the courtesy to blush while I do. :)
Date: September 17, 2008 06:04 pm Title: There are things about me you don't know.
i like this
Author's Response: Thank you! :)
Date: September 17, 2008 05:58 pm Title: There are things about me you don't know.
Wow. I love how she is aware of his nightmares and how she comforts him. That killed me.
Author's Response: Well don't die! :) Seriously, though, thank you so much. :)
9 [Report This]Date: September 17, 2008 05:49 pm Title: There are things about me you don't know.
Very nice story. Thanks for sharing it!
Author's Response: Thank you, and thanks for reviewing! :)
10 [Report This]Date: September 17, 2008 05:40 pm Title: There are things about me you don't know.
This was beautiful, Little Comment. It was like two little love letters to one another. Just perfect. **sigh**
Author's Response: Well gosh, Kells, thank you so much! I never thought of these as love letters, but you're absolutely right. :)