Date: October 29, 2006 03:11 pm Title: Chapter 1
Stamford, Stamford, Stamford! [/Dwight]
Author's Response: So what are you trying to say? ;-)
10 [Report This]Date: October 29, 2006 03:03 pm Title: Chapter 21
Wow that was some chapter and they are still taking it slow. Can't wait to see what happens when they leave Jon's.
Author's Response:
eh - maybe they'll be tired of one another by that point. ;-)
thanks for the comments; I do really appreciate the feedback!
10 [Report This]Date: October 29, 2006 02:39 pm Title: Chapter 1
oh no, why is Pam sad?
this is a great story btw...i was so happy this was a long chapter!
Author's Response:
Nothing serious, don't worry. :-)
Thanks - I was afraid it was too long!
Date: October 29, 2006 02:19 pm Title: Chapter 1
Okay, when I beta I can't say much that you haven't already heard but I wanted to be that all important 208th review! Hee! I'm continuing to love this ride but let's get these kids in the car and to Stamford! Pronto! ;)
Author's Response:
patience, patience - good things come to all who wait, etc.... :-)
There's nothing to stop them now, except maybe a car breaking down, a freak blizzard in October leaving them stranded, or nuclear bombardment by North Korea. :-)
Date: October 29, 2006 01:22 pm Title: Chapter 21
5 things I loved about this chapter:
"Take me to Stamford so we can f***"
"I am a tall gangly white boy"
the chocolate pudding reference,
dancing, not swaying to Sing,
the belt loops
Now get those two to Stamford before somebody has a meltdown!!!
Author's Response: thanks, Lis - I'm always trying to find ways to work in their history; I think that's what two people in love (and who've known each other as long as they have!) would do....
Date: October 25, 2006 09:26 pm Title: Chapter 20
First review ever on here, and let me say that I love your story!
Also, there's no chance that I just sat and read all 20 chapters. Nope. None at all.
Date: October 25, 2006 08:06 pm Title: Chapter 20
Okay, so this was awesome - but (aside from the last little exchange, which should just get a blue ribbon all of its own), I loved this: "Well, that's not my fault," he said softly, kissing her neck again. "You know I've been wanting to share my cooties with you for a long, long time."
She laughed and turned around in his embrace. "Now that's a pick-up line certain to charm the ladies."
God, so funny and so in character. And funny as it is, it makes me wistful, because *this* is what they could have if only the damned writers would hurry it up! :o)
Author's Response: Thanks- now to mix this with your outstanding proposal-in-boxer-shorts, and we're on the way to the ultimate fic. ;-)
Date: October 25, 2006 06:59 pm Title: Chapter 20
Fun chapter. I laughed at Jim wanting to leave that minute for Stamford and just leave Jon a note. Then of course his line about the threesome - too funny!
Date: October 25, 2006 04:41 pm Title: Chapter 20
Moxie -- really like how you are writing Pam as wanting their first time to be just perfect ~~ I think that is very Pam-like ~~ and while I enjoy some good Jam smut, I am finding this balancing act she is doing between flat-out lusting after Jim (and frankly, who doesn't?) and truly loving Jim so much that she wants the physical part of their relationship to be as sweet and tender as the emotional part to be very true-to-life and something I can really identify with.
I also love how Jim doesn't let her put down her artistic talent. I thought "Boys and Girls" was a major moment in their relationship -- it became clear Jim loved Pam in such a way that he only wanted the best for her, more than just a crush or surface level attraction. Really loved how you bring this element of Jim back to the surface. Very sweet.
Date: October 25, 2006 02:49 pm Title: Chapter 20
Props for the last two lines...funny! Great chapter, lots of fun to read. It's nice seeing them relaxed and together.
10 [Report This]Date: October 25, 2006 02:46 pm Title: Chapter 20
Okay, the whole things was so sweet, and this,
"Yeah, well just remember," he told her, pulling his trousers back on. "He's my brother, and no matter how drunk I get, or how much you plead, there will be no wild threesomes. That's just gross."
"Damn it," Pam pouted
made me snort with laughter. Definitely my favorite line all day:) I've so enjoyed this story - I'll be sad to see it end.
10 [Report This]Date: October 25, 2006 02:29 pm Title: Chapter 19
I can't believe how well Pam took the news about Wendy-the-hussy trying to put the moves on Jim. She's a better woman than I am. Then again maybe I would have been more angry that he hadn't mentioned me to her!
Author's Response: I really wasn't sure how she'd react about it all, but then as I wrote it, and given that it fell shortly after they'd talked about her feelings on the separation, she just seemed to be willing to be understanding about it. I think she was finally allowing herself to feel loved and so she knew Wendy was never, ever, ever anything but a ridiculous situation.
10 [Report This]Date: October 25, 2006 01:18 pm Title: Chapter 20
Yippee! My two favorite movies in the same chapter!! And Princess Bride is in my top 5 too. How cool is that?
One very small nitpick- the word "film" was used just a few too many times for my personal taste. Maybe because I just say "movie" or even "show" (like my grandma :)) but it took me out a bit. Other than that, lovely. Can't wait for Stamford :P
Date: October 25, 2006 12:02 pm Title: Chapter 19
Oh wow. Wow. Is it wrong that all I want in life is to lie on a bed with JH/JK on one side and the other JH/SF on other? Just to lie there and look from one to the other? I love this! ANd I love the dynamic between Jon and Pam here.
Date: October 25, 2006 11:54 am Title: Chapter 18
Gah. Those hands....
And this: "Do you mind?" he asked, "Must you lust after me so openly?"
So Jim - charming, funny - I can just see him saying this!
Date: October 25, 2006 11:46 am Title: Chapter 17
Wow - you know, I so hope we get to see this on the show, because it's such a realistic explanation. We all tend to sympathize so much with Jim because he's more outwardly hurt, but I've always thought about how awful it would be to be Pam - having him just leave so suddenly. Great job here!
Date: October 25, 2006 11:43 am Title: Chapter 16
Awesome! I love this - I'm so stupidly excited, like this is happening to me or something!
Date: October 25, 2006 11:10 am Title: Chapter 20
What a wonderful chapter. Can't wait for more
10 [Report This]Date: October 25, 2006 11:00 am Title: Chapter 20
Yum, yum, yummy. And woo hoo!! So I Married an Axe Murderer and massages? LOVE IT.
"I'm afraid I have no fucking clue what your problem was."
AMEN SISTER. ME EITHER!!!
Date: October 25, 2006 06:18 am Title: Chapter 20
No wild threesomes? I can hear the groans out there of disappointed readers! Nice tease - thought we were getting some action and then Jonathan comes home. Lots of great lines, love the banter in this chapter and you already know of my love for "So I Married an Axe Murderer" so I might dare to call this my fave chapter! So far...
Author's Response: Yes, I know - but there some things Jim has decided he will not share anymore. I suppose we have to respect that. I'm looking forward to a bit of HotforJim!Pam that's coming...
Date: October 25, 2006 12:05 am Title: Chapter 20
Still cute and wonderful. I have to ask, though. Are you English? I say this because I see the words "trousers" and "pub" and Americans generally don't say that. It takes me out of the story a little to hear them use those terms, since they never would in the show.
Sorry, I'm just a details girl.
Author's Response: trousers may actually be more regional than non-american, and the place their evening takes place is actually called (something) pub, which is probably why I've been using the term. But you've a very good eye! Thanks for the comments and I'll make sure I keep an eye out for similar things. :-)
10 [Report This]Date: October 24, 2006 03:12 pm Title: Chapter 19
Being Pam right about now sounds like such a blast. Two Halperts at her disposal, and she gets to keep one of them! Lucky, lucky girl...
Author's Response: Well, she deserves some in her life after all those years with Roy, no? And yes, it was pretty easy to live vicariously through her in that chapter!
Date: October 24, 2006 06:06 am Title: Chapter 19
Another great chapter Moxie! Pam in the middle of a Halpert boy sandwich? Delish! (Also, I couldn't help but thinking of the movie "Along Came Polly" w/ the many, many pillows in Jon's bedroom!)
10 [Report This]Date: October 24, 2006 05:14 am Title: Chapter 10
"When I get chest hair,"
*snort* Good thing I wasn't drinking my coffee while reading this. Been off the fanfic train for a while but this is a very nice way to jump back on board. Looking forward to reading the next 9 chapters.
Author's Response: Thanks - welcome back to this evil, but fun, dark side. ;-)
Date: October 23, 2006 08:32 pm Title: Chapter 19
Loved the interaction between all three. Great job