10 [Report This]Date: November 23, 2008 05:31 pm Title: Chapter 1
I feel like I should tell you that I am completely in love with this story (and all of your other ones, too). I keep coming back to it for re-reads.
You write Toby (and Kelly!) so well, I am now forever endeared to them!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I just love writing Toby and Kelly. So glad you enjoyed it.
10 [Report This]Date: September 26, 2008 06:05 am Title: Chapter 1
you have this incredible ability to make me laugh out loud at like, three lines in a row, and then the fourth one is just so real and sad and toby and bittersweet, and it just brings such an extra level to everything. i enjoyed this so much. your kelly is so perfect. and it was so sad, but always so funny and poignant, the sadness of it never drowns out the joy even though it is so sad.
sequel, PLEASE?
this is the greatest universe ever. i hope kelly ended up staying some more days. or that toby followed her back to scranton. or got a tan, or started wearing colors.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm so glad you enjoyed it. rnrnWhile there's part of me that would love to write a sequel, I just don't think that many people care for the Toby character anymore and wouldn't be too interested. I always have ideas though. Thank you again!
Date: September 25, 2008 10:04 pm Title: Chapter 1
Awesome. Kelly/Toby just works for me somehow. There's a lot more going on inside Kelly's head than people seem to give her credit for, and I think Toby's quiet assertiveness could draw it out of her. And I think he'd enjoy her chatty moments too.
Nice. Not a tough sell at all.
Author's Response: Oh thank you. They just work somehow for me too, despite their differences in age and personality.
10 [Report This]Date: September 25, 2008 02:34 pm Title: Chapter 1
I love this SO HARD. I'm mostly incoherent (combo of loving this and eagerly awaiting the season premier tonight), but I just wanted you to know that I think it's great!
Author's Response: Thank you so much!