Date: February 20, 2017 06:15 pm Title: Chapter 1
Brilliant! This is so perfectly them!
Date: January 26, 2009 03:53 pm Title: Chapter 1
wow, this was brilliantly sweet. it shows so clearly how everything between them, the little jokes and playful banter, means more than real words in their relationship.
Date: September 28, 2008 07:52 pm Title: Chapter 1
You know what I loved about this? Everything, but especially the Hungry Man bit... it's so every day domestic and so them. Thanks!
Date: September 28, 2008 07:51 pm Title: Chapter 1
So cute and creative! I loved this:
“I’ll show you Hungry Man.” I want to have sex with you right now."
Date: September 28, 2008 03:41 pm Title: Chapter 1
With these two, it has always been about what they aren't saying. I love this.
Date: September 28, 2008 03:32 pm Title: Chapter 1
Cute cute cute! This is exactly how they talk (and how my bf and I talk :D) Loved it.
Date: September 28, 2008 12:01 pm Title: Chapter 1
Awww...
You show their chemistry perfectly...
Date: September 28, 2008 08:23 am Title: Chapter 1
WOW!
This is incredible!!!
So in-character and perfect and adorable and AHHH!
LOVE it!
Date: September 28, 2008 08:21 am Title: Chapter 1
I want to have sex with you right now.
BWAH! I think that's what they all mean.
Date: September 28, 2008 06:56 am Title: Chapter 1
Oh my god this is so cute. The little things only they understand when they're joking around. :)