10 [Report This]Date: October 03, 2008 09:54 am Title: Chapter 1
Your Andy is so spot on...Little Drummer Boy into Disturbia. OMG.
This is such a great insight into Angela's character. I'll feel bad for Andy but I really want Angela to forgive Dwight enough to be with him, not just sleep with him.
Really great characterization across the board. A nice JAM change and a great read. Thanks for posting it!
9 [Report This]Date: October 02, 2008 05:07 pm Title: Chapter 1
oh wow...i think this is fantastic. such a realistic, complete look at this weird triangle, and you were fair to all three corners of it. great, great story!
Date: October 01, 2008 09:45 am Title: Chapter 1
That's somewhat of a bedtime for Angela. The sun should still be out.
Date: October 01, 2008 03:53 am Title: Chapter 1
If I were to quote my favorite parts, there would be more quoted than not quoted. This was an absolutely amazing analysis of all three characters and the situation.
9 [Report This]Date: September 30, 2008 08:38 pm Title: Chapter 1
I really like this look into Angela's mind. I think you paint a very plausible picture of how she views the men in her life and how she shuts off thoughts from her mind so she can sleep at night. You have made all three sympathetic characters in this vignette - an impressive feat!
I especially liked this paragraph:
She realizes that this isn't going to last too much longer. Both of them are going to want more soon, Andy will want a wife and Dwight will want her without Andy. She's not ready for either.
9 [Report This]Date: September 30, 2008 07:34 pm Title: Chapter 1
Wonderful job. I've been wanting an Angela fic since the premiere, and this was absolutely great. I love the line near the end, "Both of them are going to want more soon, Andy will want a wife and Dwight will want her without Andy. She's not ready for either."