7 [Report This]Date: October 04, 2008 07:41 pm Title: i take a breath, pull it in until there's nothing left
This was so romantic and sooo sensuous - and very beautifully written.
Date: October 04, 2008 10:57 am Title: i take a breath, pull it in until there's nothing left
I don't care HOW many post-Job fics there are, it never gets old :)
You really bring across the 'wow'-ness of the whole situation both of them feel. The novelty and relief and joy just never gets old.
And the way 'it' happens, the way you wrote it isn't about what happened so much as how it felt- and it wasn't huge and drawn out and complicated- it just happened and it was very them.
"I can wait," he assures her, hoping that she didn't think he expected anything by showing up tonight. Feeling guilty that maybe he did.
Oh Jim. You can never really quite take the gentleman out of him, can you?
jeans he's worn all day and a hoodie he hasn't washed in weeks
This is great. Why is it any other man would be grimy and kind of 'ew' but on Jim it's just totally ok and, dare I say it, manly.
So you're awesome, in other words :)
Author's Response: Haha, well, you're awesome for such a long review =P Thanks so much!
10 [Report This]Date: October 04, 2008 08:49 am Title: i take a breath, pull it in until there's nothing left
I love this, Flonkerton. I love that Pam, essentially, initiates it, too. I love how he just can't seem to stay away from her, now that he's 'back', so to speak. I love this:
How easy it became to find himself, cheeks tinted with a light five o'clock shadow but eyes bright, back at her door.
I do truly think that once they had that date, Jim would have realized the weight off his shoulders, and almost instantly would have started to become more like his old self.
Oh, and of course - this was pretty hot, too ;) And like others have mentioned - I could never get tired of post The Job stories. They make me happy! Great job.
Author's Response: Thanks so much, I'm happy you liked it!
10 [Report This]Date: October 03, 2008 07:09 pm Title: i take a breath, pull it in until there's nothing left
Thats HOT....love it!
Author's Response: Haha, thanks =)
10 [Report This]Date: October 03, 2008 04:51 pm Title: i take a breath, pull it in until there's nothing left
My day suddenly got better, flonkerton. A big welcome to your muse. LOVED this. After all this time, you found yet another fresh take on this scenario, and it's so good, so sweet. Off to read it again...
Author's Response: Hehe, I'm so happy you liked it NanReg, thanks for the review!
Date: October 03, 2008 04:02 pm Title: i take a breath, pull it in until there's nothing left
I love when a story makes this scene fresh all over again. Love how he's simply compelled to go to her, how vividly not only the lust, but the love comes across. This feels carefully written, and I appreciate that. Your last sentence is so beautiful and strikes just the right note - with such lovely delicacy.
Author's Response: I'm not even going to lie; seeing that you reviewed gave me a bit of a geek-out moment. It was a wonderful surprise =) And thank you so much for the sweet review, it made my night!
Date: October 03, 2008 02:53 pm Title: i take a breath, pull it in until there's nothing left
Ooh, so happy to see that you've posted this here!!
We definitely need the Jam!Smut to carry us through to next week. Nicely done.
Author's Response: It's gonna be a long second week until the next episode! Thanks for the review!
9 [Report This]Date: October 03, 2008 02:50 pm Title: i take a breath, pull it in until there's nothing left
So dirty and so pretty and impressively of that particular moment between S3 and S4. I don't think I'll ever get tired of post-Job fics. I read this one twice. Well done, flonk.
Author's Response: Well, seeing as I'm someone who's read all your fics at least twice, I'm really flattered. Thank you so much, Talkative =)