Date: September 19, 2011 02:09 am Title: Chapter 1
I think I should watch the deleted scenes to get more context of your story and also about the colorblind, which I thought you made up.
They should explore Toby and Oscar friendship more. Oscar did say that Toby was one of the sane people in the office but has mentally checked out.
Author's Response: Nope the deleted scene where Oscar helps Toby with traffic school, Toby mumbles about being colorblind. But I would definitely recommend watching deleted scenes; it can certainly fill in context, especially where Toby is concerned.
10 [Report This]Date: October 15, 2008 07:00 am Title: Chapter 1
I love stories that focus on the "peripheral" characters (even if I rarely write them myself). This is a lovely, realistic, witty yet sensitive portrayal of two characters who find themselves mostly sane in an insane situation. Great work!
Author's Response: Thank you. I love the peripheral characters so much and love writing them (even if there isn't much interest in reading them). Thank you so much for reading and reviewing.
10 [Report This]Date: October 14, 2008 11:52 pm Title: Chapter 1
ha! poor Oscar - thinking Toby's ticked when he's stuck in the hospital just dying to hear from ANYBODY :P This was a really good story - very insightful way to take little pieces of story and develop them :)
Author's Response: Thank you so much!