Date: July 15, 2009 08:02 am Title: Love is Like an Onion
Awww! Nicely done. Michael was spot on. Loved the glimpse at the moments we didn't see in the episode. And the song, which is now stuck in my head. Hee!
10 [Report This]Date: November 02, 2008 03:42 pm Title: Love is Like an Onion
OMG. Amazing. They're so perfect together, and I think you captured that . . . adorably. Yikes.
r0;Your hand is on my butt.r1;
r0;Yes, it is,r1;
Totally adore that moment.
Author's Response: Thank you! I really appreciate it!
7 [Report This]Date: November 01, 2008 08:38 pm Title: Love is Like an Onion
Wow, great first story! I like that you had Karen and Jim riding back to Scranton together - and then the awkwardness that followed later in the Office. I also liked Jim's thoughts in the two restrooms. I hope we see more from you!
Author's Response: Thanks Kaystar! I wanted to show the actual breakup, and that Jim would still be unsure, even though he was determined to give it another shot. I appreciate the review!
Date: November 01, 2008 03:25 pm Title: Love is Like an Onion
Very sweet! I always like good first date fics!
Author's Response: Thanks! There's nothing like that first rush...
Date: November 01, 2008 09:48 am Title: Love is Like an Onion
This was GREAT! I really, really enjoyed it. Just a touch of steam and always wrapped in their deep affection for each other. The subtle touches of dialogue were so well done. Good banter, good angst (poor Karen)...kudos to you JAMhands.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for the feedback. I am so happy that you liked it!
8 [Report This]Date: November 01, 2008 08:02 am Title: Love is Like an Onion
That was awesome!
What a smooth, pleasant read!
Author's Response: Thank you so much!
10 [Report This]Date: October 31, 2008 06:54 pm Title: Love is Like an Onion
I love it! This was great!
Author's Response: Thank you!
10 [Report This]Date: October 31, 2008 05:30 pm Title: Love is Like an Onion
Even though its now season 5 I always like to see stories from "the job" and this was great :D
Author's Response: Thank you! I am new, so I am still catching up to the rest of you. LOL
9 [Report This]Date: October 31, 2008 05:16 pm Title: Love is Like an Onion
I really liked this! I haven't found too many first date fics that deal with the immediate aftermath of leaving the interview and going back to the office. I especially liked the line where he compares the weight of the paper, like his brain hasn't really caught up yet, and also the talking to he gives himself in the mirror, because it was nice to see him acknowledge that he might be making a huge mistake but risking it anyway. The title was classic and the dialogue was spot on in its humor. ("Are we gonna nurture it?")
I'd love to read some more office fic from you.
Author's Response: Thanks! The way it kind of breezed over the break up with Karen bothered me. I wanted to show Jim and being conflicted, but still determined. I appreciate your kind words!
Date: October 31, 2008 05:00 pm Title: Love is Like an Onion
Thank you for a 'happy' fan fic. It was just what I needed this after last night’s show. Hummmm, Jim and Pam actually touching each other, kissing too. What a novel idea. Maybe you should write for the show! Thanks for your post.
Author's Response: Hah! Yes, well, I like the touchy feely. Thank you so much for the review and the thumbs up!