1 [Report This]Date: September 02, 2020 11:33 am Title: Nothing Hurts Like Your Mouth
Okay, this was the BEST first fight fic I've read and I couldn't NOT comment... This is really incredible. Seriously, in every way. Just... wow. Thank you so much!
1 [Report This]Date: August 13, 2020 04:47 pm Title: Just When You Think You Got A Hold
OK Go videos are amazing. I love the one for “The One Thing”
1 [Report This]Date: March 04, 2019 01:07 am Title: The Dangers of Drunken Channel-Surfing
I've been loving this so far, but THIS chapter was hillarious and so Jim and Pam!
1 [Report This]Date: October 29, 2017 07:43 pm Title: "My parents have been fighting for weeks and...it kinda sucks. Jim's been great."
Good lord you are a talented writer, just so damn smart with these characters.
This whole series has so much brilliance but I have to say chapters 1, 5, and 8 are my favorites but ch 7 (the fight) is just so incredibly well done. A true standout.
I truly hope you are still writing. If you ever feel like writing for jam again just know there are plenty of readers here and even a good handful of writers to keep you company as well.
Date: May 04, 2009 04:26 pm Title: "My parents have been fighting for weeks and...it kinda sucks. Jim's been great."
this story is AMAZING.. and we need more..pronto
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm trying! :)
Date: March 11, 2009 10:40 am Title: Nothing Hurts Like Your Mouth
What a great chapter. Totally in-character. It actually felt cathartic for me as well; I always wished that they would hash things out on camera at some point.
Date: March 10, 2009 06:42 pm Title: "My parents have been fighting for weeks and...it kinda sucks. Jim's been great."
every single one of these little stories is absolutely SPECTACULAR!
keep them coming! :]
you should do one about jim or pam getting sick and the other one taking care of them! just a little suggestion, if you're taking them!
Author's Response: Aw, thanks so much - I'll do my best! :)
Date: March 09, 2009 10:22 pm Title: "My parents have been fighting for weeks and...it kinda sucks. Jim's been great."
Wow, very detailed and realistic story telling! Though I'd hardly expect less from you. You're a gifted writer, to say the least. And, yeah, the topic did hit pretty close to home. Sure wish I had my own Jim...for many reasons, obviously, but for the support. You conveyed this aspect of his character so well, even though he was reluctant to do so. He did it anyway. What an honest story!
Author's Response: Thank you so very much for all the kind words! I tried to stay as true-to-life as possible here, so I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Date: March 09, 2009 09:06 pm Title: "My parents have been fighting for weeks and...it kinda sucks. Jim's been great."
I absolutely love this. Jim is selfish and hating himself for being that way. Pam hates that her whole life seems to be deteriorating in front of her and needs a sanctuary. Just another beautiful example of how great their relationship is and why they are going to make it in the long run.
Author's Response: Thank you! I think it's hard to know the "right" thing to do in this situation and thought it would be interesting to tackle it. I'm really glad you liked it. :)
Date: March 09, 2009 08:28 pm Title: "My parents have been fighting for weeks and...it kinda sucks. Jim's been great."
::sigh:: I'm in love with Jim. Jeez...first, I think this is a completely plausible explanation for how this all happened. Also I loved Jim's amateur psychoanalysis of Pam's family dynamics and how it relates to her time with Roy. But then the last bit where he's figuring out how much she'll regret if she doesn't let her dad stay...wow. Again -- I'm in love.
Perfect.
I missed this story!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! It was a tough one to write, and write realistically, so I'm really happy you enjoyed it.
9 [Report This]Date: March 09, 2009 05:55 pm Title: "My parents have been fighting for weeks and...it kinda sucks. Jim's been great."
This was incredibly well written. You write both of them so well, and the dialogue is right on. Bravo.
Author's Response: Thanks a lot! I always have an easier time writing Jim, so I'm happy you think I tackle both of them fairly well. Thanks again!
Date: March 09, 2009 03:57 pm Title: "My parents have been fighting for weeks and...it kinda sucks. Jim's been great."
This is kind of awesome. Why can't they be on camera all the time so we can see this sort of stuff?
Nicely done, as always, Little.
Author's Response: Oh, Lisa, I know...but then again, if we saw everything this would be a lot harder to write. ;) Thanks as always!
10 [Report This]Date: March 09, 2009 02:46 pm Title: "My parents have been fighting for weeks and...it kinda sucks. Jim's been great."
Oh what a wonderful picture you paint! I feel like I really understand that episode's story line and even Pam a little better (or at least, the canon for Pam you and I have discussed). The choices you made about them having a very traditional family totally made sense with FOB's (that's Fancy Old Beesly) demeanor, and even little details like why Pam's mom liked Roy so much. And I loved how you were so real in their struggle to decide if they should let her dad stay there, how really neither of them wanted to but they felt that obligation... very believable. Two thumbs way up!! :D
Author's Response: Thanks so much, friend...this was sort of uncharted water for me so I'm so glad you thought my ideas got through clearly. I was really nervous about it. And as for keeping it real...I always try. Thanks for thinking I succeeded. :) You're the best, as always.
10 [Report This]Date: March 09, 2009 12:55 pm Title: "My parents have been fighting for weeks and...it kinda sucks. Jim's been great."
awws.
jim is the best (:
Author's Response: He's pretty dawesome. :)
10 [Report This]Date: March 09, 2009 11:19 am Title: "My parents have been fighting for weeks and...it kinda sucks. Jim's been great."
Oh man. This was a repeated hit to the grief bone, but it was so well done, I can't be too upset about it. This is just so achingly real, and I love these glimpses of "grown up" problems that every couple has. This may be outside your comfort zone, but trust me, you're doing just fine (TWSS!) Well done my friend!
Author's Response: Ooo, sorry - can I get you some ice? :) Thanks so much for your kindness, as always; I tried to stay realistic while leading up to resolution we all know happened, so I'm glad you liked it. Muchas gracias, mi amiga!
10 [Report This]Date: March 09, 2009 10:37 am Title: "My parents have been fighting for weeks and...it kinda sucks. Jim's been great."
This was really well done. I loved how you handled both Pam and Jim's emotions regarding her dad comign to stay,delicately and realistiically. Jim's thoughts on Pam regretting it were, again, nicely insightful and altogether, the tone to this chapter was held together very well. I always look forward to these adventures. Thanks for another one :)
Author's Response: Thank you so much for sticking with this! Your comments are all so kind and appreciated. :)
10 [Report This]Date: March 09, 2009 09:15 am Title: "My parents have been fighting for weeks and...it kinda sucks. Jim's been great."
This was just what I needed to brighten my day. Ever since Stress Relief I've been waiting for a great back story on Pam's family and how Jim and Pam deal with the situation together. This is absolutely wonderful. Every word rings true. The characterization is spot-on. The story is beautiful, sweet, and very believable. And I love how you present her parents relationship and contrast that with what Jim knows. The little details about the dishes are a nice, subtle touch that gives us more insight into Pam's past.
This story feels SO right that I would love to see more of how they deal with Carl at their house and how Jim continues to be supportive. I'm being greedy, I know!
Really, I could quote you your whole story back to you to point out my favorite parts. So without being too repetitive and leaving you an epic review, I'll end by saying this story is truly beautiful. Please don't make us wait long for your next update!
Author's Response: Thank you! I felt the same way...I wanted to know more about this situation with Pam's parents that was clearly a long time in coming, and the stress it had to be putting on both her and Jim, and their impending wedding. So, for better or worse, I wrote it. ;) Thanks so much again!
10 [Report This]Date: March 09, 2009 08:35 am Title: "My parents have been fighting for weeks and...it kinda sucks. Jim's been great."
I've missed you and your fics. This has to be one of my favorite series, and you ALWAYS impress me by nailing Jim and Pam perfectly.
Can't wait for more.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! :)
10 [Report This]Date: March 09, 2009 06:44 am Title: "My parents have been fighting for weeks and...it kinda sucks. Jim's been great."
Little Comment, I was just starting to really, really miss you...and here you are again! This was so welcome on a miserable Monday morning. I truly love your writing. You're always so insightful. Jim's initial hesitance and annoyance is perfectly realistic. It's been my opinion (and general opinion, too, I suppose) that Pam's relationship with Roy was patterned after her parents' relationship. It was good that you didn't really make Pam's dad out to be the bad guy. He's just a normal guy, as is Jim. They just happen to be quite a bit different. I enjoyed reading about Jim's thought processes and his recollection of his parents' relationship. I could ramble some more, but let's just say I love it all, because I really do. Thanks for brightening my day.
Author's Response: Oh Nan, and here I am, gone MIA again...I promise I've been working - just ask Dundie All-Star! :) Thanks for your kind words on this one...it was tricky, and definitely out of the box for me, but I'm so happy you enjoyed it so much. You know I always appreciate it!
Date: March 09, 2009 05:45 am Title: "My parents have been fighting for weeks and...it kinda sucks. Jim's been great."
I was excited to see a new part to this, and I was not disappointed. Definitely worth the wait. Jim's thought process through all this is perfect - his initial honest reaction and then tempering it to do the right thing. It's especially sweet knowing what happens afterward. Another great job.
Author's Response: Thank you! I had a hard time thinking that they'd be so open to Pam's dad coming to stay, so I wanted to portray that decision making (or as you said, thought process), as honestly as possible. I'm so happy you enjoyed it. :)
Date: February 11, 2009 10:04 pm Title: Carved In Stone
there are not words for how beautiful this is. it hits home with me too b/c my PaPa just passed away and i think all the time how sad i am that my future husband will never get to meet him... and that moment of clarification Pam has is just... beautiful. i love this.
Author's Response: Wow, well let me first say I'm so sorry for your loss. Thank you for your very kind words. They're so appreciated.
Date: February 11, 2009 09:54 pm Title: Give Her Effervescence - She Needs A Little Sparkle
ugh! angst! i love it :) and top gun quotes are the BEST! that last little bit was just heartbreaking! "... the highlight of every God-forsaken day." ugh.
Author's Response: Thank you! I was unsure about the Top Gun thing, but I'm glad you like it. :)
Date: February 11, 2009 09:48 pm Title: Nothing Hurts Like Your Mouth
woah. that was intense. but still really good. i like that Jim isn't perfect here, and neither is Pam. most of what they're fighting about is ridiculous, but it's real and insecure and honest. great job :)
Author's Response: Thanks a lot! I tried to keep the fight as realistic as possible but let both of them cross the line on what's fair to say - they're still learning, after all. :)
Date: February 11, 2009 09:27 pm Title: The Dangers of Drunken Channel-Surfing
ok. you are fast becoming my favorite person ever. first of all Drunk!Jam is the best. Drunk because they were hanging out with Jim's friends and he loves her more than he ever has before is even better. and then Pam steals my heart by picking one of (i will confess) my FAVORITE guilty pleasure songs. love it. absolutely love it. :) this chapter is my favorite thing ever.
Author's Response: Aw, how nice of you! I have a secret love for that song too. ;) Glad you enjoyed these crazy drunk kids! :)
Date: February 11, 2009 09:15 pm Title: Hypothetically, Mind You...
aww!!! i love Jam babies!!! :) :) :) or even the thoughts of them. my favorite part was "Fact: I can." haha
Author's Response: Thanks! :)