10 [Report This]Date: September 28, 2006 04:52 am Title: Chapter 1
This was lovely--I could practically hear them saying the words in my head. Particularly loved the last bit when Pam calls Jim out on not being sorry.
Author's Response: Thanks! She had to call him out. :)
10 [Report This]Date: September 27, 2006 05:52 pm Title: Chapter 1
What a wonderful story. I loved the last few lines - "I didn't mean to..." "Yes you did..." "I'm sorry..." "No you're not." It all seemed so real and so them!
Author's Response: Thanks! That's my favorite part, too, because they do know each other so well and Pam would know, she just would.
9 [Report This]Date: September 27, 2006 05:09 pm Title: Chapter 1
Spot-on characterization here. I almost wish it had happened this way. Great job!
Author's Response: Thank you so much. I'm glad you liked it.
9 [Report This]Date: September 27, 2006 03:02 pm Title: Chapter 1
That was such a great vignette. I wanna know what happens next ! :)
Author's Response: I thought I would leave it as it is but maybe if things start to go horribly wrong on the show, I may just have to have my own little world ;) The power of fic!
10 [Report This]Date: September 27, 2006 02:45 pm Title: Chapter 1
Good job!!! I really enjoyed it.
Author's Response: Thank you!
9 [Report This]Date: September 27, 2006 01:20 pm Title: Chapter 1
First: congratulations on being our 100th author!
Your characterizations here are terrific. This scene could have happened just as easily as the one that actually did. This was tense, funny and sweet. Great job!
Author's Response:
Yay! I win at life! :) Thank you very much for reading and reviewing. And sorry again for the category placement. I know now...I hope!