Date: January 18, 2009 03:46 am Title: Boobs, Breasts
I'm sorry I haven't reviewed before, I'm really slack at that sort of stuff, but I thought I'd better now, cause I hate people to be discouraged. I was enjoying your one story a chapter but it is nice to be in the interesting puberty years :) Spend as much time as you like there! I will try and review more often as I think this idea is really sweet and interesting.
Author's Response: Thanks so much. Ahhh, the interesting puberty years...
8 [Report This]Date: January 17, 2009 09:14 pm Title: Salt
My 3 year old was "making veggies" today and told me I was eating Chocolate Green Beans at our tea party. The salt in the lemonade made me giggle. I am glad you're back!
Date: January 17, 2009 04:23 pm Title: Boobs, Breasts
I am really enjoying this story. Since you have skimmed over their early years now you probably should just keep going. My only worry is that you make Pam sound too much like a valley girl. I just can't really picture her ever being like that. Keep going though because I am enjoying reading this alot.
Author's Response: I appreciate the observation. I know the valley talk was a little un-Pam. I was trying to remember how 13-year-old girls cover when they're nervous, and to my recollection, it was by trying to sound like you were "totally cool." If you weren't, you went too far trying. Thanks for reading, stay tuned.
Date: January 17, 2009 03:32 pm Title: Boobs, Breasts
definitly needs to be accelerated more! lol you're a great writer, can't wait until your next post
Date: January 17, 2009 02:42 pm Title: Smelden and the Muffin
I really enjoy where this is going, but please don't make it full of roy-angst. I love that you have given Jim and Pam such history, this story just screams fluff and future romance. I look forward to more updates!
Author's Response: Don't worry, there won't be too much. A bit, but nothing overkill. Honestly, I think the other characters will make cameos throughout, but for the most part they'll all play small roles, if at all. Jim and Pam are the focus.
Date: December 28, 2008 08:41 pm Title: Brownie Mix and Bathtubs
They are so cute! I love them yelling for one another and getting in trouble. adorable.
Date: December 28, 2008 12:41 pm Title: Brownie Mix and Bathtubs
You know you have kids when silence is suspicious, not comforting.
I love that full names have such an effect on kids. All kids know that that means business. And if you add in the middle name, its like, instant.
Pam is broken!
Sleeping kids make everything alright. No matter how michievious they've been you get them in bed, and they look so darn cute, its impossible not to love them.
Date: December 28, 2008 12:37 pm Title: Naked Time
Oh god, trust me, I've dealt with too many 'private part' incidents to count. Trying to explain the dos and don'ts of all of it, it gets frustrating.
My three year old neighbor loves pinecones. Or "ine-nones" as he calls them. God I love that boy.
Date: December 28, 2008 12:33 pm Title: Jimmy Pammy Boat
Wait? Complaining about 85 degree heat? I'd eat it up. Probably also since our Indian summers flirt with triple degrees, but also, I'm a summer girl, and 55 is freezing cold to me!
Author's Response: I'm a Northeastern gal. Anything above 75 makes me crazy. Of course, I moved to the South earlier this year, so summer was a blast.
Date: December 28, 2008 12:30 pm Title: Baby Elephant Walk
I really can't believe how long its been since my baby was 11 months. It was only the summer, but she's grown up so much since then!
I'm gonna have quiche for the first time this week. I'm a bit hesitant, it always looks a bit weird, but I'm gonna make it and try it out!
The ability to speak child/adult is important. Also important, the ability to speak over 10 screaming kids.
I've never gotten squirted by boys. The littlest ones have always been girls, I start the boys a bit older I guess. That's an experience I am fine with not having.
Share and no grabbing. Kids never learn those. I've got 10 year olds who seem to forget them.
Their actions are closer to a 13-15 month old, than an 11 month old, but really, cute babies make my heart melt!
7 [Report This]Date: December 28, 2008 12:23 pm Title: Smelden and the Muffin
Laurie! Little Women is, by far, my favorite of the classics. I reread it all the time, and still cry every. single. time!
Oh, and Joan, I can't even arrange flowers, so you've got me beat.
Now I really really want ice cream...
Date: December 10, 2008 05:42 pm Title: Naked Time
LMAO it's like you're writing about my sister, she is just as naughty as baby Jimmy and Pammy. I can't wait to read more of these. You have ro do one a year :)
Date: December 10, 2008 05:33 pm Title: Jimmy Pammy Boat
omg that is so cute. I have a little sister who is just like baby pammy, and you have that age spot on. Love Jimmy's Pammy :)
10 [Report This]Date: December 10, 2008 05:27 pm Title: Baby Elephant Walk
That is so cute. When I first read that it would be a baby fic, I was like eh, but it is so brilliantly written, I just want to keep reading. I love how cute they are, omg it's adorable.
Author's Response: Thanks, Hannah. It won't always be a baby fic; I'm planning to take them up to present day, so you'll get to see them grow up and become the Jam we know (with some twists). But it will definitely get more adult later on.
9 [Report This]Date: December 10, 2008 05:16 pm Title: Smelden and the Muffin
That was really great. I love how their mom's have met before they were even born aw :)
10 [Report This]Date: December 10, 2008 11:16 am Title: Naked Time
Haha loved this chapter. I burst out laughing when Pam shouted "Penis"!
I guess the name is confusing if you haven't read 1st chapter, but I think it's fine
Date: December 04, 2008 09:23 pm Title: Jimmy Pammy Boat
Oh my gosh they're so cute. I cannot wait to see them get older. I love reading about them together.
Date: December 04, 2008 04:12 pm Title: Jimmy Pammy Boat
They are so cute together. It's kinda sad I can picture the two of them in that boat playing together. I find it adorable that Jim is so concerned for Pam at 20 months.
Date: December 01, 2008 05:24 pm Title: Baby Elephant Walk
OMG they are so cute. I love the little language and mannerisms between them. So adorable.
10 [Report This]Date: December 01, 2008 10:17 am Title: Baby Elephant Walk
This was really cute!! I love that you're really focusing on the moms at this point and giving little clues about how they're raising them and how they want them to act toward each other, which will lead into how the two of them interact in the future. Definitely continue!!
10 [Report This]Date: December 01, 2008 10:04 am Title: Baby Elephant Walk
this is to cute haha I never thought of this concept of them as babies together but its just so cute! I love them trying to say each others names :)
Date: December 01, 2008 06:38 am Title: Smelden and the Muffin
I wasn't going to read this one but am very glad I changed my mind. It's a different idea and can't wait to see them growing up together.
Date: December 01, 2008 06:17 am Title: Smelden and the Muffin
There is no better picture in my head right now than Pam taking Jim's elephant and sitting there with a satisfied grin on her face. Great Job.
Date: November 30, 2008 05:29 pm Title: Smelden and the Muffin
Interesting. I like the concept for this story. I can't wait for baby Jim to meet baby Pam.
9 [Report This]Date: November 30, 2008 04:29 pm Title: Smelden and the Muffin
I like this idea. Nice first chapter on how Pam and Jim's mum met. Interesting to see how their lives are affected by knowing each other during childhood