Date: September 10, 2009 08:46 pm Title: Smelden and the Muffin
Please please continue this it's one of my favorite stories
Date: September 09, 2009 10:32 pm Title: Smelden and the Muffin
I hope you're still writing this, because you're version of our favorite couple is very interesting, adorable and touching. It would be so great to learn where they go from here. And you promised us a wedding! :) Well, you sort of did, anyway.
Date: July 12, 2009 07:01 pm Title: Black Lace Panties
If you get around to it Please Please Please update this story I love it so much and i really want to find out what happens
10 [Report This]Date: March 08, 2009 12:44 pm Title: Black Lace Panties
Lol I had a feeling you were going to do this! Am glad they're at least friends again. I have a feeling Pam won't be too happy if Jim warns her about Roy.....
9 [Report This]Date: February 05, 2009 02:18 pm Title: Are you there, God? It's me, Jim
great chapter! I love reading your story and I think that you are capturing that awkward post relationship but still want to be friends thing between Jim and Pam. I can't wait for the next chapter!
Date: February 05, 2009 02:12 pm Title: Are you there, God? It's me, Jim
awww thats so sad :'(
10 [Report This]Date: February 05, 2009 12:35 pm Title: Are you there, God? It's me, Jim
Wow you're right, did NOT see that coming! So intense, and what a great way for them 2 re-connect (although in unfortunate circumstances)
Hope they remain friends now
10 [Report This]Date: February 04, 2009 10:00 am Title: Watershed Basketball
Wow I really like this. Did not expect you to break them up so soon! I just hope Pam doesn't date Roy, or Jim go with Katy! But I have a feeling that's what you'll do ;)
Author's Response: Nah, Pam's going to date Katy ;-) Seriously, I think something might happen in the next chapter that is unexpected. And bear in mind that even though it's only been one chapter since they got together, this one takes place 11 months after the last one did, and they're 15 here (14 last time), so they were together a significant while in teen time.
Date: February 03, 2009 07:20 pm Title: Watershed Basketball
I'm a seventeen year old girl, so yes, I can vouch that I am kind of stupid haha ;D
So far this is a wonderful story, please update soon! :)
Date: February 03, 2009 09:07 am Title: Watershed Basketball
Good stuff Maynard!
Date: February 03, 2009 06:25 am Title: Watershed Basketball
Well it's alittle sad to know they aren't even friends anymore. Hopefully they can at least get back to that. Especially if their parents stayed friends.
Date: January 30, 2009 02:54 pm Title: Butterflies
I lovedlovedloved this! Keep writing, you make high school Jim and Pam so adorable and believable. :]
10 [Report This]Date: January 29, 2009 08:34 pm Title: Butterflies
awww :) they seem so cute when they were teenagers. well even though this is AU its still so cute. :)
Date: January 29, 2009 08:05 pm Title: Butterflies
The whole ending of this chapter just made me grin and blush... I love teenage JAM and their budding romances :)
Date: January 29, 2009 07:53 pm Title: Butterflies
OMG this is just so cute. I love Jim asking her out in one full sentence. Too adorable. I had a complete flashback to high school dance right now. Cannot wait to see what happens now that they've kissed.
Date: January 27, 2009 07:48 pm Title: Smelden and the Muffin
I am lazy so it takes alot for me to write a review. I really really like this story. Please update soon! =)
Date: January 23, 2009 10:56 pm Title: Boobs, Breasts
It takes a lot for me to get invested in an AU fic, but I'm quite enjoying this one. Keep it up! :)
10 [Report This]Date: January 18, 2009 06:55 pm Title: Smelden and the Muffin
i really love this story! it's so cute, and i can't wait to see what happens! please post another chapter soon!
Date: January 18, 2009 10:17 am Title: Smelden and the Muffin
don't give up. i'm usually to lazy to review but I really love this story. it's such an original concept and it's so cute to see hints of how they interact now in their early years. also, the cameos are hilarious.
Date: January 18, 2009 07:05 am Title: Boobs, Breasts
I always loved this fic. They were so cute together as kids! I like that we're moving forward but it would have been interesting to see a little more of them being split apart when Pam moved to California. I'm curious what will happen now that they're teens.
Author's Response: Aww, thanks! Sorry there wasn't more on their separate lives, but it seemed like the story wasn't really resonating with people and my goal, of course, is to write something enjoy, so I figured move it forward. In my imagination, Jim and Pam stayed in touch a little bit, but since this was pre-email, not too much. Maybe the families visited once or twice, but I think life just happened. Anyway, they haven't seen each other in a long time. Thanks for reading!
Date: January 18, 2009 03:46 am Title: Boobs, Breasts
I'm sorry I haven't reviewed before, I'm really slack at that sort of stuff, but I thought I'd better now, cause I hate people to be discouraged. I was enjoying your one story a chapter but it is nice to be in the interesting puberty years :) Spend as much time as you like there! I will try and review more often as I think this idea is really sweet and interesting.
Author's Response: Thanks so much. Ahhh, the interesting puberty years...
8 [Report This]Date: January 17, 2009 09:14 pm Title: Salt
My 3 year old was "making veggies" today and told me I was eating Chocolate Green Beans at our tea party. The salt in the lemonade made me giggle. I am glad you're back!
Date: January 17, 2009 04:23 pm Title: Boobs, Breasts
I am really enjoying this story. Since you have skimmed over their early years now you probably should just keep going. My only worry is that you make Pam sound too much like a valley girl. I just can't really picture her ever being like that. Keep going though because I am enjoying reading this alot.
Author's Response: I appreciate the observation. I know the valley talk was a little un-Pam. I was trying to remember how 13-year-old girls cover when they're nervous, and to my recollection, it was by trying to sound like you were "totally cool." If you weren't, you went too far trying. Thanks for reading, stay tuned.
Date: January 17, 2009 03:32 pm Title: Boobs, Breasts
definitly needs to be accelerated more! lol you're a great writer, can't wait until your next post
Date: January 17, 2009 02:42 pm Title: Smelden and the Muffin
I really enjoy where this is going, but please don't make it full of roy-angst. I love that you have given Jim and Pam such history, this story just screams fluff and future romance. I look forward to more updates!
Author's Response: Don't worry, there won't be too much. A bit, but nothing overkill. Honestly, I think the other characters will make cameos throughout, but for the most part they'll all play small roles, if at all. Jim and Pam are the focus.