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Reviewer: InternationalBusinessTraveller Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: March 02, 2009 01:49 am Title: I don't know what to believe I just show up and breathe anymore.

What a sweet, lovely description of S3 angst. Simple but oh so well done. Thank you!

Author's Response: oh, thank YOU! i really like this fic, i have quite a soft spot for it...

Reviewer: beetsarelove Signed [Report This]
Date: November 30, 2008 08:53 pm Title: I don't know what to believe I just show up and breathe anymore.

What a simple, perfect moment. She corrected herself. Not simple. Easy, but never simple.

I really like this. You know, you can capture so much from like a sentence. You know, I really love reading these well-written angsty fic because angst is not my favourite type of fic, but you seem to make me think so much about the little moments.. I really love it. I can't wait to read more. It was truly wonderful.

Author's Response: thanks so much!  this little ficlet is dear to my heart, because i felt like it was such an important moment -- before beach games, before the job, before things shook up for little pam beesly.  i'm really interested in pam's trajectory to where she is today and i had a blast writing this.

Reviewer: kaystar Signed 7 [Report This]
Date: November 30, 2008 07:54 pm Title: I don't know what to believe I just show up and breathe anymore.

"She grabbed a (Christmas) tree-shaped cookie and tried not to notice Jim, who was trying not to notice her."

I really liked that line -  as well as Pam drawing an empty heart. Very nicely done angst.



Author's Response: thanks so much!  :)

Reviewer: Hannah_Halpert Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: November 30, 2008 07:15 pm Title: I don't know what to believe I just show up and breathe anymore.

Wow, I am speechless. That really was amazing Emily.

Author's Response: thank you!

Reviewer: Colette Signed [Report This]
Date: November 30, 2008 12:26 pm Title: I don't know what to believe I just show up and breathe anymore.

Oh, Emily - I love these little moments where absolutely nothing happens on the surface, but the subtext/inner dialogue is so complex. You've captured this moment in time when everything was repressed and latent and so painfully present in its absence. And in a great minds moment, I'm working on something and just wrote the S3 part that takes place just at this moment too. So this was not only a good read, but inspiring too ;-) Thanks!

Author's Response: oh, colette -- thank you thank you thank you.  i cannot WAIT to see what you've crafted.

Reviewer: NanReg Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: November 30, 2008 10:02 am Title: I don't know what to believe I just show up and breathe anymore.

Such a perfect little fic, Emily, and this in particular:  For the rest of the day, she felt like she could smell his scent, his skin, his shirt.) What a simple, perfect moment. She corrected herself. Not simple. Easy, but never simple.  Whew. 
 

Author's Response: thanks for the feedback!  i really like this fic... not to toot my own horn :)

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