1 [Report This]Date: December 30, 2020 04:12 pm Title: Chapter 1
As always, you've done some amazing work capturing the humanity of these comic relief characters and the epic tragedies that are both Kelly's love for Ryan and Toby's entire life. (It's a credit to you that it hurts so bad knowing that this is *Kelly* who is ignoring and then mocking Toby's horrific day, because she's supposed to be the person who cares about him.) You also really drive home how wildly outrageous Michael's actions are in this episode, and offer such perfectly Toby-esque context for why there is no follow-up to it. I love seeing how you allow things to get juuuuust a little easier for Toby thanks to Kelly's intervention.
8 [Report This]Date: May 07, 2009 08:48 pm Title: Chapter 1
I'm catching up on some of your older stuff - this was very well written and thought out and I'm surprised it only got 1 review. My heart broke for Toby over and over in this story - and I liked how Kelly became less focused on herself and more focused on Toby, even to the point of asking him to come over. Another great Toby and Kelly story!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! Kelly and Toby stories aren't exactly the most popular, but I'm glad you found this and enjoyed it.