10 [Report This]Date: December 02, 2008 03:34 pm Title: it takes a thought to make a word
That was pure awesomeness, I love it. I love that she had a mini meltdown, I love that he was totally find with her reading it, god I'd kill to know what he said *sigh*
Anyway HURRY UP AND WRITE lol
Author's Response: Heee, thank you Hannah!! You'll be pleased (hopefully) to know that I'll be posting the next part shortly, hehe. Thanks again for reading, you're awesome. :)
8 [Report This]Date: December 02, 2008 02:38 pm Title: it takes a thought to make a word
This was lovely. You portray them as I imagine them (yes, I know, they're not real, but I can't help myself!
Can't wait to see the next chapter.
Author's Response: Aww, thank you jkfan! And yeah, I can't help myself either. TWSS? :D
Date: December 02, 2008 01:52 pm Title: it takes a thought to make a word
I'm a sucker for stories that involve Pam finding the mysterious Christmas card. So sweet. It's great that they can discuss the sad parts and realize that it was worth it to get where they are now.
Author's Response: I imagine that they have conversations like that from time to time because, well, it'd be hard not to. I don't think they'll ever be not grateful, y'know? Thanks so much for ready, EH. :)
10 [Report This]Date: December 02, 2008 11:28 am Title: it takes a thought to make a word
Very nice story, oobadnama. I love the idea of the mysterious Christmas card, though I doubt it will ever be brought up on the regular show again. But it's definitely something Jim would keep and Pam would love if she ever got to read it. I followed the link to the card, and it's absolutely hilarious. I'd consider buying a box, but half of my family would probably never talk to me again. :-P
Author's Response: Aww, thank you mountaineer. It always nice to revisit old gems of Season 2 even if it'll never be done on the show. And yeaaaah, I sympathsize on the family part.. they'd totally shun me too. ;)
10 [Report This]Date: December 02, 2008 11:02 am Title: it takes a thought to make a word
This was really adorable! I am dying to know what he wrote in that card.... *sigh*
Here I am thinking its a oneshot and I read at the end "up next"! Awesome :D
Author's Response: Oh, me too! And yet.. not so.. like I said, I love that it remains a mystery. Thanks for reading, aimzers!
Date: December 02, 2008 09:27 am Title: it takes a thought to make a word
Very nice job! I liked that you didn't actually tell us what the card said, and that Pam had her "revelation" moment like Jim had in "Money." Sweet and funny, I enjoyed it.
Looking forward to the next one as well.
Author's Response: You know, I never compared that to Jim's in Money but I suppose it works out well, hehe. Thanks so much for your kind words, Jazz.. really means a lot. :)
8 [Report This]Date: December 02, 2008 08:42 am Title: it takes a thought to make a word
I really enjoyed this, oobadnama. The little unseen moments are so appealing, aren't they? Such fun to imagine. Very clever of you not to include the card's message. Keep us guessing :) I'm a big fan of visuals, and that card is so funny (gotta get some for myself). Very much looking forward to their night in.
Author's Response: Ahh, thank you so much Nan. Always so great to hear from you because you always have such lovely things to say, hehe. The unseen moments are great; what we wish we could see yet are the reasons why we keep writing. :)
9 [Report This]Date: December 02, 2008 08:23 am Title: it takes a thought to make a word
The front of the card is VERY funny.
This was so sweet! I loved how you kept the mystery but still were able to let us know exactly what it said. Beautifully done. I love these little moments as well.
"He stares at her intensely, his eyes never leaving hers. "You have to know," he begins, whispering. "You have to know what no matter what happened before, the pain, and us hurting each other; that I don't care about that at all, I don't even think of it, because this.." he gestures between them. "It was totally worth it. I'd do it all again if it'd meant we'd have this."
I really enjoyed this particular bit. Wonderful and I'm really looking forward to "A night in" Good job with this! Thanks for posting it.
Author's Response: Hee, thank you so much, Elle. I also loved that part too, definitely a favorite line of anything I've written. Thanks again so much for the review, it made me smile. :) (and yeah, I love the card too, hehe)
Date: December 02, 2008 08:14 am Title: it takes a thought to make a word
Fantastic story! I really enjoyed it. I hope there will be more chapters.
B
Author's Response: Thank you so much, B! I'm about to post the next installment and I hope you'll enjoy that one too. Thanks again. :)