1 [Report This]Date: February 01, 2022 11:03 pm Title: Chapter 3
Oooof. Jim's frustration with being seen as a somewhat sexless figure is too real... and the note of ending with Pam being desperate for him to take action is, too.
1 [Report This]Date: February 22, 2019 04:07 pm Title: Chapter 3
I respect your choice to end where you did, but ah! AAAAAAH! So close and yet so far. But quite in character for S2: he's willing to fantasize but he's not actually willing to do anything more to knock her off balance yet.
10 [Report This]Date: August 15, 2009 03:45 pm Title: Chapter 3
GAH! KISS HER! KISS HER, YOU FOOL!
sorry, had to get that out of my system.
This was a really great read. I'd love to see it continue...
Date: January 05, 2009 08:35 pm Title: Chapter 3
I'm sorry to see this one end, too. I really loved this summation:
Because, as much as it might kill him in some moments, Jim knew he really was everything he’d been accused of: Easygoing. Affable. Nice.
So didn’t say anything. Because he knew that she needed him as she knew him. Good friend Jim, supportive Jim. So that’s what he would be. He could stand it a little while longer. And she needed it. So he would do it.
For her.
Date: January 05, 2009 01:06 pm Title: Chapter 3
A) If it were possible to die of double entendre, Jim would be on his way to the grave. I adore this line!
B.) I'm sorry to see this story end. It seems like a perfect point to take it AU and have Jim and Pam come to some sexy, angsty revelations about each other. If you chose not to let it fall back into canon but take it in a different direction, I'm sure you would be able to pull it off admirably.
Date: January 05, 2009 12:47 pm Title: Chapter 3
Good story please continue.
B
Date: January 04, 2009 08:47 pm Title: Chapter 3
this is so great, I'm loving it.
10 [Report This]Date: January 04, 2009 06:18 pm Title: Chapter 3
andtheivy, I have to say that I'm really disappointed that this is done. I loved this chapter so much--I wanted to keep reading. I had hoped for another chap or two. Having said that, I respect your decision to end now.
“Um, but do you have anything harder?” It all came out in a blur. And that is, indeed, what she said ; )
Author's Response: Thanks, Nan. Honestly, I had planned to make this story around 5 chapters. I also thought there would be some real life (well, real fic life) Jim and Pam HEAT, but when I started writing, that's just not what they wanted. The end was honestly unplanned, but when it happened, it seemed like a graceful place to let the story make its natural conclusion. Its climax, if you will. rnrnAnd yes, indeed that is what she said.
10 [Report This]Date: January 01, 2009 10:12 pm Title: Chapter 1
very good description of what probably did happen, that we didn't get to see.
what would be totally awesome, is if you wrote one (after you finish this one, i can't wait to see where its going!!) about Pam during Season 3 and how she was the one that was in angst seeing Jim with someone else, and how she dealt with it. you could also show Jim coming up to the Door and surprising Pam too.
great story!!!
^^just a suggestion, keep up the good work
Author's Response: Thanks, I'll definitely consider that one!
Date: December 24, 2008 02:10 pm Title: Chapter 2
oooo
thank you for that
chrismas came early lol
9 [Report This]Date: December 24, 2008 07:16 am Title: Chapter 2
andtheivy, I love this story like I love any guilty pleasure. Keep going--get as dirty as you wanna be! Jim's fantasy? Whew! I'm gonna go get a glass of water ; )
9 [Report This]Date: December 24, 2008 12:35 am Title: Chapter 2
Ooooooh this is getting good. Keep going, I want to see what happens next :)
8 [Report This]Date: December 23, 2008 10:43 pm Title: Chapter 1
Nine inches, huh? At least Jim has porn as a fall-back career if paper sales don't work out!
Author's Response: Totally legit. I have sources.rnTOTALLY KIDDING. Well, you know, it was a tough time for Jim. And he's all tall and stuff, so you know... I figured I'd be nice and throw a kid a bone.rn(And yes, that is what she said)
10 [Report This]Date: December 23, 2008 10:23 pm Title: Chapter 2
love this! this site is lacking in the raunchy smut dept lately! More? :D
Date: December 17, 2008 04:16 pm Title: Chapter 1
Jim is definitely the all-around nice guy, but the key word is guy. I think you've got him spot-on here.
Author's Response: Haha, yeah. I don't know any guy, no matter how nice, who doesn't get frustrated sometimes. Same for women. Heck, even Charlotte on Sex and the City once said "Don't you ever just want to be f***ed?" rn
Date: December 17, 2008 03:14 pm Title: Chapter 1
no no, you were clear.
I was just saying that the way I read it (aloud), I started laughing.
&& believe me, I know guys that age do it xD
Author's Response: Haha, okay! rnrn
Date: December 17, 2008 01:50 pm Title: Chapter 1
hahahaha, for some reason I started laughing at this:
"Jim’s balls tightened as he thought of what he wanted to do. He reached down to grasp them with his left hand as his right still worked on his cock."
I was trying to imagine him doing that xD
&& of course, nine inches sounds pretty good to me ;]
Author's Response: Was I unclear with that part? I meant that he was fantasizing about what he wanted to do with Pam, not what he was planning to do in the course of that session of masturbation. I didn't mean for it to sound like he was being turned on by the thought of fondling his testicles. Is that what it sounded like?rnrnAnd yeah, it's kind of funny to think of Jim Halpert self-abusing, but I think 99 percent of the men I know in their 20s and 30s masturbate at least daily. (This is based on most of them telling me about it, because something about my personality makes men comfortable telling me their penis tales and their emotional woes)
10 [Report This]Date: December 17, 2008 01:27 pm Title: Chapter 1
I don't spend a lot of time imaging Jim's penis. - Oh, is it wrong that I do?
That was so freaking hot:)
Author's Response: Hahaha, thanks Hannah. rnrnAnd no, I don't think there's anything wrong with that. Unless you wear an "I Heart Jim's Penis" tshirt
6 [Report This]Date: December 17, 2008 12:37 pm Title: Chapter 1
Um.
I don't know how I feel about this. I can't ever imagine Jim having any of these thoughts, or using so much anti-woman language, even just in his own head.
Author's Response: Yeah, it doesn't seem very Jim-like, does it? I based this part of the story on a few friends of mine who, like Jim, are perpetual nice guy charmers and have confided in me that sometimes they hate that about themselves because they feel like women see them as less virile and manly, and it can be really, really frustrating. One of my friends said something like "I like that women trust me, but sometimes I just want to be like 'hey, I'm not a eunuch.' This was Jim's frustration really coming to a head.
7 [Report This]Date: December 17, 2008 08:28 am Title: Chapter 1
oh my. lol
I liked it. I like seeing him come from a man point of view. He wants what he wants. My boyfriend is a lot like Jim, very sweet to women, nothing perverted. But sometimes, he gets his hands on my butt and I can't seem to make him let go.
Kinda like here. He wants her, he wants her bad. And he's sick of being the nice guy.
I love different point of view stuff, right on.
9 [Report This]Date: December 17, 2008 08:16 am Title: Chapter 1
I could say so many things right now but will refrain ; ) You most definitely have my attention. Continue please...and feel free to keep imagining Jim's penis :)
Author's Response: Oh no, please do share. rnrnMore references coming up. (That's what she said).