9 [Report This]Date: October 02, 2006 11:34 am Title: Every Breathe You Take
A happy ending for the Kevmeister! Kinda.. What a fun story this has been. Great job!
Author's Response: So glad that you liked it.
10 [Report This]Date: October 02, 2006 06:05 am Title: Every Breathe You Take
“Sure. As long as you fire Andy for me.”
Love that line. Perfect endng.
Author's Response: It sounded like a very Michael thing to say.
8 [Report This]Date: October 01, 2006 01:59 pm Title: Roxanne
Poor Kevin. So happy one minute with the thong and so sad the next.
Author's Response: I know, poor Kev.
10 [Report This]Date: October 01, 2006 01:56 pm Title: Every Little Thing She Does is Magic
My heart broke for Pam when she ran into Jim and Karen. And to know they are going to be working together. Too sad.
Author's Response: Oh, I know, but maybe things will get better?
10 [Report This]Date: October 01, 2006 01:21 pm Title: Roxanne
Poor Kev
Author's Response: Yeah, I know.
7 [Report This]Date: October 01, 2006 09:32 am Title: Roxanne
Poor Kevin! I hope chapter 5 finds a way to help him keep his dream alive.
Author's Response: Maybe...
10 [Report This]Date: October 01, 2006 09:12 am Title: Roxanne
Hee. Best use of zebra ever!
Author's Response: Haha! Thanks! It was one of the first ideas I had for the 5 Elements.
10 [Report This]Date: October 01, 2006 09:11 am Title: Every Little Thing She Does is Magic
Oh, poor Pam! Kevin's not entirely clueless after all. Nice use of the waterfall!
Author's Response: Thanks!
10 [Report This]Date: September 30, 2006 09:09 pm Title: Every Little Thing She Does is Magic
Kevin was so sweet to do that. Ahhh
Author's Response: I think Kevin's always had a small crush on Pam as well.
9 [Report This]Date: September 30, 2006 05:17 pm Title: De Do Do Do, De Da Da Da
Tee hee. I love Kev's POV. Niiice!
Author's Response: Thanks! :)
10 [Report This]Date: September 30, 2006 04:55 pm Title: De Do Do Do, De Da Da Da
Wow, everyone sounded so in character! I loved Dwight in the beekeeper's outfit to protect him from asbestos!
Author's Response: Thanks! The beekeeper outfit was the first thing I thought of for the glove element.
8 [Report This]Date: September 30, 2006 04:11 pm Title: De Do Do Do, De Da Da Da
Oh Michael, sometimes you don't know when to stop talking. Great chapter 2
Author's Response: Thanks!
8 [Report This]Date: September 30, 2006 04:09 pm Title: Message in a Bottle
Kevin is so funny. Great chapter 1
Author's Response: Thanks!
10 [Report This]Date: September 30, 2006 11:40 am Title: Message in a Bottle
I loved the way you worked Roy's mug shot in there and gave the reunion as the backstory for it. So perfect! And Kevin and groupies, priceless!
Author's Response: Kevin and groupies - they seem to go hand in hand.
6 [Report This]Date: September 30, 2006 09:23 am Title: De Do Do Do, De Da Da Da
I *love* your Kevin.
"Tee-hee, he said abreast!"
7 [Report This]Date: September 30, 2006 09:06 am Title: De Do Do Do, De Da Da Da
Dwight had said “a breast”!
Nice!
9 [Report This]Date: September 30, 2006 08:32 am Title: De Do Do Do, De Da Da Da
Ah, Michael- so sensitive. This is great!
10 [Report This]Date: September 30, 2006 08:30 am Title: Message in a Bottle
Nice start. Your Kevin voice is frighteningly accurate!
Author's Response: Haha! For the sake of the story, I'll take that as a compliment.
10 [Report This]Date: September 30, 2006 08:04 am Title: Message in a Bottle
Yay! I love this! Now all you need is a Zebra, some salsa, and a waterfall. Can't wait to see them.
Author's Response: They're on their way.
9 [Report This]Date: September 30, 2006 07:27 am Title: Message in a Bottle
"Groupies! Hehe" - perfect last line for Kevin! Cool idea, can't wait to read the rest.
Author's Response: Ha! Thanks!
10 [Report This]Date: September 30, 2006 06:57 am Title: Message in a Bottle
Oh, this is a GREAT story! Love it so far. Glad that Kevin's band got a gig afterall! Can't wait to read more!
8 [Report This]Date: September 30, 2006 06:30 am Title: Message in a Bottle
This is a very good idea! I am looking forward to reading more of it!
10 [Report This]Date: September 30, 2006 05:15 am Title: Message in a Bottle
Wow, you really tapped into Kevin's head and that's impressive and scary. So funny. Loved the way you worked in bits of the story too - Roy's DUI mug shot, the wedding that wasn't, Kevin's infantile fantasy about the infamous kiss (as reported by Kelly - perfect!) What a treat!
Author's Response: Thanks for the great review, Colette!